For some reason I always imagine Slayer as Azazel

Are Vincent and Slayer related?

huh. No Magneto? Why did you not have Eric Lenchier? (I am sure that is not how his name is spelled, but oh well)

wait a minute. with Demons and creatures of the Underworld involved, why isnt Hellboy there?

I KNEW IT! I thought that something would come up shortly after Slayer healed her!

this demon from the underworld kinda reminds me of Dark Gaia from Sonic Unleashed. you know, demon older than time, stuck in the earth for all eternity, only able to send pieces of it

wait a minute... Emma is getting sick? and relatively soon after she was healed by Slayer? does this mean that the potion used by Slayer to save Emma was able to give her the ability to have kids?

The hell? a Xiaolin Showdown reference? rofl, didnt see that coming

you know, I think Emma needs an outfit that won't be decimated every time she goes into battle

I find it interesting that Xavier Institute is filled with so many telepaths

wait. wasnt Sebastian vaporized? I know that Jason/Mesmero and Selene would still be alive

wait a minute. since Tessa knows of Xavier and the X-men, and she was part of breaking up many other criminal organizations over the years, does that mean Tessa works for SHIELD?

I take it Deathstrike is the same chick that was infused with Adamantium much like Logan and controlled by William Stryker in the second X-Men movie?

In one word epic, simply epic man. Probably one of the best fanfics I've on this site. First and foremost is how the X-Men were put through a series of horrific ordeals and managed to overcome. Secondly the OC's in this are very well done and wonderfully complex and diverse. On to more specific aspects of this story:

Astonishing job with Mystique's personality and her efforts to do right by her children. Raven's reactions to the horrors inflicted on her children was especially well done. It was really touching to see them make an effort at piecing their family back together. It would've been interesting to see the meeting between Raven and Kurt's foster parents.

I also loved the family dynamic between Logan, Ororo, and Laura. Absolutely touching, X-23 truly deserves the happiness she's found with them.

Amara's storyline was very nicely weaved into the over all plot. Her emotional struggle over her sexual identity was a very human one a midst this tale of superheroes and the supernatural. Honestly you shown the human side virtually all the characters.

And before I get to the last part of this I must say this: WAY TO GO MCCOY :D!

The final battle and especially the epilogue were perfect. I know of no other way to say it so hats of to you and Slickboy444.

Peace Out!

Sinister and Selene? An interesting couple...(takes drill to temple in an effort to bore out the mental images) well even Hitler had a love life.

The good Doctor Essex though is the thing that stands out the most in this arc. Shaw's main traits as a villain were his debauchery and petty cruelty. The thing that made Sinister such a chilling adversary (and a better villain) was his complete and utter detachment from such things.

Having him be responsible for Scott and Alex's death was an unexpected twist. Honestly it was better then the whole Shiar abduction angle marvel took.

Also your handling of Deadpool was great in particular his pestering of Deathstrike.

Honestly all the characters have been handled so well in all of this, everyone has gotten an equal amount of spotlight time as far as I can tell in terms of character development and I can't wait to what more lies ahead.

Peace out!