Are you mad or something? Why aren;t you completing the fic? Please comlete it. I am dying to read it.

Kikyo!? I thought of kagomefrom the start!

Nice story n all but did u honestly have to have

the girl he liked kikyo :O

I hate her !

Gosh wouldove bien the best story I ever read till

I saw that he like kikyo :/

aah its way too good...but i see you havent written

in foreverr !...for any of ur fics actually :(

I actually thought kagome was blue in the beginning too..that was a shock and im glad she actually isn't :D

I really really really badly wish that ud continue with this, its so good even though its only been TWO chapters..

please keep going...it would make a lot of ure readers really happy ! _

please update

THANK GOODNESS THIS IS AN INU/KAG FIC!i have to say, i was pretty much going ballistic when i couldn't find out...cuz it said inu/kag in the summary but seemed like an inukik. no offense to all kikyo-luvers but, but i prefer kagome over kikyo. thanx for writing this story. pleez update soon!

I love it! Very funny, and I love Kagome's personality. I can't wait to see what she does next. Keep writing!

Its a very humourous and delightful fic, and I'm sorry that I couldnt read more! Not saying that you need to update, just commenting on how I was enjoyed the first chapters intensly. :D good job and I hope you re-gain your inspiration. (I also LOVE your song that you wrote.. :D side note. ;)

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I'm not the greatest with writting critics, so i'm just gonna give you my honest opinion here. If it's even worth anything...Anyway this review covers all the stories of yours that i've read *ahem*

Your writting style is excellent. Your characters have such depth and soul. especially Kags in Painless. It was intertesting the way you had her come across so detached from everything. Sorta like she was merely an observer to life instead of participator. I don't know if you share my same views, but basically all i wanted to say was that your characters have an 'edge' to them. Makes me want to learn more about them. Which anyhow is a good thing, right?

Your Stories have a recognisable plot (many don't) and you actually have (AND THANK GOD FOR IT) good gramer.

As far as cliff hangers and 'OMG' situations go, you're pretty much at the top. Love the suspense, intrigue etc.

Right. better stop now. this review's getting kinda wordy. _

I like thsis o far but is it gonna be a Inu/Kag in the end? I hope so!

awesome story. can't wait til your next update duude! _

Very cool fic so far thanks 4 sharing!

please update soon :)

cheers

kachan

hm... intersting...

I really like what's happening. ) Update soon please.

~Local G.