Come on. U cant just leave us hangin like that. Plz continue.

Okay, um...This isn't really a review of your fic, even though I read it over and it's well done and I liked it. The thing is, I need to inform you of a problem. You see, I was reading a different story, called "Look What You've Done" by RavensCave and while trying to get from chapter one to chapter two, I wound up here. I'm sure you can see the problem. It would seem that your fanfiction has somehow been given the same web address as the one that should have been given to chapter two of RavesCave's story. If this is the first time you've heard this, then I think you should tell someone who runs the site. If this isn't the first time you've heard this, I'm sorry if this message is repetative. Anyway, it was a good story. I'm sure this little problem will be cleared up soon. Keep writing!

I really want you to finish this! It would be awesome if you did.

holy crap. this story kicks so much butt. please, write a second chapter or something. it is awesome.

don't leave there! just a few more liines of nick calling please!

omg! this is the only chapter? no! its so good, i need to read more of it! please add more!

so, what happens next?