Wow

I have not really understood ...

but you should update because it looks interesting!

This review is a few years late, but well. . . better late than never, right?

Anyway, I just wanted to say this is probably one of the top 5 Feibel-ish stories ever written. The characterization was spot on. It was angst without seeming like gratuitous pre-teen "philosophical" whining. This is how angst should be. Writer's should use this as some kind of a meter stick to measure there own pathetic whiny worth. (He, Albel moment!)

I found very few grammar errors, no spelling problems that I picked out, but I wasn't really looking. The only problems I found were a few sentences with strangely placed/ missing commas. Overall I would say the writing is beautiful. You have an excellent grasp of ~descriptive~ adjectives, and saying what you mean without redundancy. (I'll try not to be redundant in this review otherwise we'll be here all day!)The timing on certain parts is what makes this piece really stand out in some ways. Whereas a lesser writer would start out by saying "He wanted 'Bel to where the collar" you lead into it leaving the audience wondering "What's going on?" until you resolve it with "In the end he wore the collar."

The biggest problem with this fic, imho, is the title. It kept me away from this story for 3 years! Not that there's anything inherently wrong with it, but 'insanity prelude' sounds too. . . amateur? teeny-bopper? It's a bit like naming your fic "Untitled" or "Nocturne" or "Madness" or some variation of the color red. It's just overdone in fandom, you know? Like you picked "adjective" "noun" off of the 'angsty title' list of words.

Still, glad I finally got around to reading this! I'll be sure to check out some of your other stuff now, if its in fandoms I'm familiar with. ;)

~Ja ne.

Another great SO3 ficcy! I love it when authors go digging around inside characters' psyches. You do so marvelously. I never realised how well I was going to like Albel as I watched my Brother play the game, but it's stories like these that do my obsession justice! Thank you much!

Well it was and bit nicely done even if he did have and dark past and bit sad if you ask me but that enough sad about it.

That dose remind me it was and tad bit dark but other wise it was alright even if it was about the past. but keep up the good work.

Ah so serious about this one it was kind of dark but how dark are you going to make it? please not too much but anyhow you did and good Job on it.

I like it

Man you make Vox sound so evill...are you sure Vox didn't do anything to him?...ew...sick never mind I don't want to know...but yeah it is sad and dark tell me there going to be another one next one it well be sami-Angst? now how is Fayt going to be his downfall? falling in love with him felling emotions agin?...

tbc...na? to find out what happens next one.

*claps* Not bad, not bad at all. I love angst (I hate Vox though, gr!). This fic was well written and the angst perfectly done (and not over done to the point of sappyness).

Good job!

Now, I really liked this one! It reflects Albels inside and past in a good way, keep it upp!

Hey this is not bad , quite good actually...Poor Albel-sama!

Ah, I do so love you very much.