You are sooooooo good! I loooooove yaoi!

OHMIGOSH. I just read this story in three/four nights. It's awesome. It truly is. I've read only four or so volumes of DNAngel, but I'm in love with the story already. I haven't even learned what the story is "actually about" according to the author's sidenote! You write very well, and it seems your career in writing, hobby, job, whatever, is/will be a good one. It's been a long time since its been written, already 10 years, but I'm sure the new generation enjoys it like I do. (I'm part of the new generation, I assume) To make this a bit of a shorter review: THIS IS AN AWESOME FANFIC AND A MUST READ FOR FLUFFY DAI/SAT FANS SO READ IT NOW THOUGH ITS A BIT LONG OR ELSE I WILL COME AFTER YOU WITH YOUR KITCHEN KNIFE

overall, this is a great story... :)

I loved this story! A sequel would be really good! I didn't want to stop reading it last night and I just started it less than a full day ago! Keep writing please!

haha. love this fic :-)

wo! this story is amazing. kudos to u. thanks :-)

i'ma gunna have to kill you if that gift is seriously for Risa.

of course, i assume it's probably for Daisuke, but Satoshi put Risa on it to fool him...

still. ima kell u if it is for Risa!

i freaking hat her.

I didn't even have to go back to know that the hospital room was the same one his grandfather was in. You have done a really nice job at writing these stories, good luck in the future.

Overall I have to say that that was entirely adorable. :)

A couple quick and kind of silly notes: 1) Kosuke isn't actually a Niwa in any way. He just took on Emiko's last name so as to pass it on to the next generation. Hence any Niwa curses shouldn't apply to him. 2) In Scrabble you only have seven letters. The only way to form the word "ragnorak" is the use all seven plus one already on the board, which earns the player a bonus for using all of his/her letters. PLUS it's impossible to play a word that long without running into any of the bonus squares on the board, lol. So Sato only earning 22 points for that word is utterly impossible.

haha :D

i love your story

Awesome! And Dark gets his own body too! *whistles* XD

Arigatougozaimasu! Thank you very much!

DIE RISA...DIE!

*glances around*

(from Risa fans: stare...)

*shuffles back to little dark corner*

Anyway, before someone who really likes the Risa/Daisuke thing hunts me down -

I really like the stories! *whistles* Who ever would've even begun to consider how Satoshi is related to th Haradas? Waii! Off to go read more of it now...

This was beautiful, I loved it. Thankyou! so full of emotions, I cryed, I laughed, I smiled. And hey, we'll figure it was good enough for me to read all 24 chapters of it. the ending as well as the beginning stuck through. But to tell you the honest truth, I really liked the last line ... "For Now...Merry Christmas...wherever you are." That just kindof struck me as a deeper, 'let's wrap the whole thing up' the story started on 'Christmas' and the Epi ended on 'Christmas' I thought that was clever. but i'm just rambling now. It's 3:36 - couldn't sleep. Found the rest of your story all complete and finished it. And I'm GLAD I did.

Thanks again!

~ BFS.

Aw So sweet, really good story... i was so caught up in this one... but I'm actually upset at the ending... why does nobody love Krad? *rescues him from Black Wing* hehe i love you krad.

OMG THAT WAS PROBOBLY ONE OF THE BEST DNANGEL; FANFICS I HAVE EVER READ!1

AND TURST ME I HAVE READ !ALOT!