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awesome and sweet it was cool how ororo wants to fully adopt blink that is so sweet blink is one of my faces of ur oc's she so quite and polite

Very sweet, I'm happy for Clarice/Blink and Ororo. Though I must agree with Vivian about Ororo's love life and in time I hope she will fall for Logan.

~Vicious

aw, that is so sweet!

Ahh, that is so sweet. And I hope Vi and Blink succeed with their plan to set up Logan and Ororo.

Nicly done!:)

yet another excellent side-story on one of ur characters. i loved how vivian adn blank are plotting against ororo to get her with logan, but i do agree with he reason for not rying anything b/c for logan to have a daughter especailly when it's x-23 its definatly a full time thing, but hey u neer know

Aw what a great story! I love it! We never did get to see Vi's reactions in the show to Evan's leaving. You gotta keep doing these one shots!

Nice little side story here my friend! I loved how Carl and Vivian teased Ororo about her love life. And I really like the implied Logan/Ororo material! I think Blink sure is picking up on it! Makes me wonder what she may think of having him as an adopted father and Sarah as a sister! I can't wait to see how that develops! You know I love Loro! Nice ending too! It was very sweet! Like always you amaze me my friend! You rock! Peace out!

Nice to see this is finally up. I think the suspense had been building for some time.

Is Carl really Ororo's brother-in-law's name, or is that your idea.

I think I can agree with Evan saying he felt he never really fit in with the X-Men. But I wonder what was the real source of it - teenage rebellion, stubborn attitude, or something else.

Lockheed acting like a cat with a ball of yarn? Okay, I can accept some outlandish things in your fanfics because of the genre involved. But that's just a little too much of a stretch to accept.

Nice family meeting, and good banter between the sisters.

Maybe you should consider having Blink meet her parents again during a random encounter. Give her a chance to make a final closure, should she need to.

Still toying with a LoRo, huh? Maybe you should consider it more fully only after Xavier, Logan, and Ororo learn about Scott/Jean and Vince/Rogue. Though Ororo has a valid point in not pursuing anything with Logan at this time. He has his hands, or should I say claws, full with his daughter.

Those glimpses into Ororo's and Vi's pasts - did you get them from the comics, or are they your ideas.

Seems like Blink's parents were the black sheeps of their respective families.

After hearing about Ororo skinny dipping, I wonder if Blink might try something like that. Nah. Not Blink. Tabby and Pam, however... And maybe Jean, Rogue, Kitty, and Amanda. I included the latter two because of how serious they are with their respective boyfriends.

I knew it. I knew that was the good news.

Well, considering everything, I think everyone at the Institute would understand Carl's and Vi's concerns and their wish that the baby doesn't have an active X-gene.

Now Ororo and Logan are going to be victims of a conspiracy between Blink, Vi, and maybe Carl. I like to see what happens should either, or worse, both find out about the conspiracy.

A touching ending. Will she still be Clarice Fergurson, or will be be Clarice Munroe. Unless she thinks she still has a chance with other members of her family, since you mentioned she had several uncles and she got along well with them, I think the latter would be the better choice.

Maybe you should do a small sequel, or make a second chapter to this one, in which Blink meets Evan.

Oh, one thing. I spotted a little errata in your Daytripper fanfic. The way you wrote it, you made it sound that the Seftons met Kurt before mutants were made public. As I recall, it was the other way around. The mutants were made public first, then they met holo-Kurt, if you get my meaning.

Great story! I really like this one!

That was so sweet. How is Evan going to find out about his new sibling?

great chapter i throught this was a nice chapter i'm happy for blink and ororo i wonder how its going to effect your storys from now on

Aw that really cute...! Ororo is going to adopt Blink! So is something being cooked up to hook Logan and Ororo up? This was really good!

Peace out

Aww, this was adorable. Now Blink's got a real family. Yay for her!

I mever thoght of 'Ro being the skinny-dipping type, but hey, this is your fic.

I guess the 'Ro/Logan thing is a foregone conclusion, huh?