Reviews for Picnic
countingthestars12 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
This was very well-done. I love how you characterized their relationship - Gordo's outburst, Lizzie's gift, everything. Awesome work :D
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Aw, that was SO SWEET! I loved this; great job! (:

Angelica
NA chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
This story on the whole was definitely worth reading. There were times whilst reading the story where i could actual picture the characters acting in such manner, however, 'crap' and 'jackass' honestly would never be said by any of the lizzie meguire characters. That aside along with a few grammatical errors, it was a terrific story. 4/5 for its creativity and flawless whit

PLEASE WRITE MORE! YOU HAVE FANS WHO REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR TALENT!
Drew chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
man! that was such an awesome fic, why didn't I see it before?
christylee chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Since I'm still kind of new here and so busy writing, it's taking me a little while to catch up on so much reading. I just picked this out to read and I love it, it's so cute! It feels so real. The only thing I can't latch on to is Gordo "snarling." I can't imagine that. Maybe another word that means almost the same thing, but not so harsh? I'm too tired now to think of something, but I just can't imagine Gordo "snarling." But everything else rings so true.

One question I've always wondered about though. Didn't they have like hours and hours going home on the plane together? Wouldn't they have talked then? Unless they were so exhausted and in SHOCK by everything that had happened?

I agree, nice how you brought in the other episodes. I love when it all ties together!
LyG4ever chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
So, so, so sweet! I loved it!

Keep it up!
psalm57 chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Very cute. I love how it all fell into place. And I especailly liked how you used events from old episodes. Very cute, and keep writing. Lizzie and Gordo forever.
AloneTogether4 chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Aw... wonderful! That's all I can say.
A Pleasant Reader chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Ohh! Lovely Fluffy Fluffiness!

BUT REALLY? Gordo snarl? You're out of your mind!
fLuTeBaBII1220 chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
om gomg omg! that is like so good1 i finally got to see the lizzie mcguire movie for the first time last weekend, so i wanted to read one of these kinds of storys! this one is the best one ive read so far! i love it! keep on going!
RonsLuver chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I luved it! I'd like to read the next chapter where they face the music! I think this has potential to be a longer story! Something to think about maybe?
Tinkerbell79 chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I really like the way this is starting! And I really like that Gordo got mad and told her what he really thought, in a lot of stories, probably mine included, he is such a doormat and just rolls over for her. Looking forward to more!
hockeylover chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Awesome story! D I LOVE it! I like how you had Gordo get angry and not just brush it off. This story had conflict to it before the resolution, and that's the way all stories should be. It makes the resolution all that much better. Adding to faves...
RTds9 chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Damn fine job.I like reading these "after the movie" stories
Lin chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
that was good,to bad it was only a one shot.
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