This story was so perfect and I love the idea!

I LOVE YOUU! This is such a fun story..por Narugami...or ...poor Heimdall rather! Well at least Loki got the best of Narugami and for heimdall...nevr mind..he might haunt me forever...hehehe (please dont tell him).

This really SUCKS! (oh and in goth, sucks mean its SO GOD. Thats according to a book I read but I'm not sure if its true...dont take the 'sucks' too bad)

Wah! I thought Freyr saw Loki in the line. Hehe.. I feel sorry for Narukami-kun. XD

This was HILARIOUS! I couldn't help but chuckle at what Loki was telling "Santa". Great job!

lol trust me i no how it feels like to have fun torvhing heimdall me and my friends make up evil things like sometimes i say if he were real and he mad or tryed to kill me id push him off a high cliff and into water OR poke his one and only eye out lol

omg lmao write more XD

I love it when you wrote heimdallr wants a paintgun so he could use Loki as a target now that was funny.

amazing. but i wonder why mayura didn't want to sit on santa's lap? certainly she would want an answer to the mystery of his one night trip around the world. lol! that would be amusing.

Stop hiding in the dark and update your stories. Pls. Thnks.

haha damm this is pure comedy! whoo! fisrt loki then heimdall.. . u shld continue maybe like reiya then suddenly turning into freya while on thors lap and then got spotted by frey and loki and mayura since they were still there shopping... . haha tht ought to be a realy chaotic and funny chptere to add! haha XD anw hope tht there will be another chap cya XD!

Please! Do write another capter, I'm loving this!

Aw...That's so cool and kawaii greatest Mythical Detective Loki fanfiction i have ever read...You should continue..Uh..Maybe with Reya or something

Really funny. I hope you write another. Mabye Mayura has to get a job for some reason and has to be Missus Claus or an Elf

plz plz plz write another one! this is sofunny and really good to! you really need to write more!NOW!*eyes glow red*

Oh my god...I havent laughed this hard at a fanfic in a LONG time...This was one of the best things I have ever read...the last time I read something that made me laugh this hard was a Yu Yu Hakusho fic involving the characters being transformed into chibi's

First Loki then Heimdall? Thor...Santa...Loki teasing him...Heimdall... paintball gun to use Loki as target practice! *hits floor and begins rolling around laughing hard*

Ok...*snicker* I'm...good...Honestly I loved this if you couldnt tell...hehe... Great job this was hilarious keep up the great work...

*bows still laughing hard picturing those images in mind*

Sharpsnout

YC: lol. I think I enjoyed the Heimdall one more! *snickers*