it was kinda funny how Tea had them right under her little sneaky fox paw,making them do anything & everything SHE wanted!-but...I was hoping for a deep sex relationship of DukeXSeto...BUT THIS WAS GREAT!THNX SO MUCH!;D

Dammit, how do you make this so interesting?

brittney

You updated, you updated! This has made...I don't know, my entire week. Oh I loved it!

I'm glad you updated this. Mai is the true 'poor Little Rich girl' she is not much better of than Joey. Her mother wants her but does not love her; she is just a possession to be used.

amazing story!

You are a fabulous writer! You describe everything so perfectly!

I loved this story! And I hope you plan on updating it!

Dear God I don't know what to say. That was awesome. Please, please, please tell me you will be updating this sometime soon. Or ever.

I was up for roughly 5 hours (now heading on 5 am) reading this. I just couldn't stop! xD I absolutely love this.

Are you planning on continuing this? If so, I look forward to it!

nice job on youer story indecent rhythm

youer storys are awesome

This is absolutely beautiful.

Your portrayal of all the characters is perfect. I love how you can be humorous one moment and then change the tone flawlessly. There were some sections that felt a little fast and confusing, such as the birthing scene, and a few sentances were a little rough, but otherwise I have no other criticisms to give.

Admittedly, I never really liked Honda/Tristan that much, but after reading this I'm starting to see him in a different light. Jou and Otogi I've always adored, especially Otogi, and several sections of this had me almost hurting for him. Your skill as a writer is astounding; it's rare to find such quality. Good luck on whatever you do, and should you continue this I would love to read more.

-N. Arishima

*smiles happily* I read this AGES ago, but I think I managed to miss this last chapter. This story is definitely my favorite for this pairing (as far as Duke/Tristan pairings go, as I've never come across another story with this threesome). You have such a unique, casual style; everything is described so realistically, I can imagine all of the events perfectly. It really is spectacular. *cries and begs* Please update!

" He felt like one big damn hero."

...is that a Firefly reference I spy?

Anyway, nice fic you got here, definitely a pairing I've never read before, yet somehow, it doesn't seem completely implausible. Looking forward to reading more!

Somehow... I missed this. Saw the beginning but never the end. I ACHED for Duke here. *Empathized* with him. Which made the whole thing work.

I reread this, as it's been a while. I still love it. Any combination of Joey/Tristan Tristan/Duke Duke/Joey is fine with me, but to actually make it work as a triangle- that takes skill. Keep up the great work.

I can't tell you how much I adore this fic. It feels so real ... It's gorgeous. I can't wait for the next chapter.