To be posted 23 July 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

Post KOTOR: The son of Revan follows his father’s path

The piece is good, but the idea that he is the Exile as it appears it will be does not fit the time frame. If you accept that time frame, he would have been exiled at six.

dude a most excellent story i hope you update soon,

Darth

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wow. i was blown away! that is great! GREAT JOB ANGIE!

Great story. I can't wait untill you update.

Really interesting beginning.

I was just wondering, because in your info/profile, you said you like HARRY AND HERMIONE? I do too, but you KNOW that Draco and Hermione is better, do you not?

lol have funn in china or taiwan

Wow very awesome :)

A superb KOTOR II fic to me. Update soon!

Wow, great chap. IT WAS ABOUT FRICKEN TIME YOU UPDATED! Yeah, Visas will be coming up soon!

Excellent job so far, hope to see more! I like the twist you brought into this, by the way, with the exile being Revan and Bastila's son. Update!

How can Revan and Bastila's son be the exile?

The exile served under Revan in the Mandalorian Wars.

I kind of like the concept though, and the story is pretty good.

Oh one more thing, you should really move this story to the Star wars game section, if you can.

It would make more sense there.

Keep up the good work.

you got kreias right! AWESOME CHAPTER!

well, I think Dustil was around... him... 15ish, maybe 20, but in KOTOR he looked really young so I would say around 15