Reviews for Burn
girlintime chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
You are a talented writer.
Empty-Account000000 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
This is a very different Montague and Angelina fic compared to the ones I've read. Very dark, slightly creepy one-shot. My favorite parts were

"One day she'll make him scream. He'll thank her."

the other

"She admires her work with a satisfied smile, each burn a brick building the road to redemption."

I really like you Montague/Angelina fics.
the sublime mime chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
I mean to review everyone of your Montague/Angelina stories, and what better way to do that than from my first favorite.

I don't know why, but a masochist Montague makes so much sense to me.

It seems as though a certain gloominess hangs over all your stories, but I like it. It's a "creative" gloominess.
CarbonMonoxide chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Creepy. But VERY well written. I applaud you for that. Eh...this is old isn't it?
Jewelinsertwittynamehere chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
I love this 'fic! It's one of the best I've ever read in the HP fandom! This is actually the 'fic that turned me on to the Angelina/Montague pairing.

I love the pace, the words, the tone, everything is just amazing. I really like this, and I think you did a really wonderful job on it.
angelface04 chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
i read this ages ago and i guess i never reviewed. it's really good. scarey, but good. the creepiest part is this one: One day she’ll make him scream. He’ll thank her.

great job -

~angelface04~
Chocolatebrowneyes chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
this was nice. real angsty tho.
Ashliegh chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
This had a very...creepy feel to it. A good feeling of creepy, nevertheless! But I really liked this, it had a sense of power and a sense of understanding between the two characters. Kind of an understanding through pain and such. Well done!
Evilevergreen chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Wow, this is a very powerful piece. I like how they share each other's pain, it's an understanding, a bond that will always connection them.