Reviews for Always There |
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The calling chapter 2 . 3/29/2018 I’m crying so hard right now |
Guest chapter 17 . 2/23/2017 Actually, wedding rings are a very recent and very useless 'tradition', which started from propaganda from a ring company. Inuyasha wouldn't have even known what a wedding ring was, let alone his mother have one. Do you research next time. |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/22/2017 This is a fairly decent story, and I say this now as I have yet to finish it, but a few things for you take note of, for future reference. Don't put notes in the writing, it really breaks the flow of the story up. At the beginning and end of the story, it's fine, but in the middle is a big no. For example, the plot twist. Your note there was uneeded, us readers were perfectly aware that was a twist. Secondly, stop with the ooc. It gets tiring reading "sorry for the ooc" over and over and over, and its undoubtedly turned people away. It's very annoying, very, very annoying, so just stick a disclaimer at the beginning of the first chapter or on the summary that there may be OOCness inside and be done with it. Other than that, good job. |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21/2017 OK but just imagine Dad: YES GO INUYASHA! KICK HIS ASS Mom: Honey I think something is wrong Dad: Nonesense Mom: no really Inuyasha: *dies* Dad: SHIT- |
kstewdeux chapter 17 . 1/2/2017 Beautiful story. Very well written. Cried. |
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2015 I'm not going to lie this is my second story of yours that I've read; find out about you by sunset mikos fav authors i believe(i love the way that woman writes .). This story actually made me tear up reading it, really great story. I love how you went into detail and explained your reasoning for why sessho and inu are enemies, well developed story, bravo lol |
riseofthewolf chapter 2 . 10/4/2014 Omg!this is the PERFECT story I've been looking for! Just...please bring inu back to life, Kay? |
unknown chapter 17 . 9/14/2014 Wonderfully amazing! |
FallenFan77 chapter 5 . 11/2/2013 Awww, this was so sad, I cried too much while I read this. I seriously needed tissues next to me. I'll get some just incase if there are any more chapters like this one. I love this story! |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2013 Wow that part were inuyasha died made me cry and I was happy to know he came back to life |
Phantasmal Abduction chapter 17 . 10/1/2013 Heh, you're an incredible writer. |
MasterFinland chapter 2 . 2/12/2013 I am sobbing. I love your story's. amazing. |
cerberus309 chapter 5 . 11/7/2012 Perhaps its just my computer, internet, or perhaps the storm(and that is a mild term for what we're experiencing), but of the 17 chapters in your, I'm happy to say, absolutely brilliant and tear inducing story, Chapter 5 doesn't seem to exist any more. |
vampgal12 chapter 5 . 9/26/2012 Chapter 5 is missing, all I see is a blank page |
JediInu chapter 5 . 9/2/2012 I love your story but can not get Chapter 5 to open. Please fix this if possible I feel I am missing something in the story. |