Sweet!

Very nice story, about a theme usually overruled. I liked how you depicted their confused feeling, and how they manage to resolve them.
It's a great on-shot, although a second chapter wouldn't hurt ;)

It was good but not enough! I wanted more !

Interesante, me agrada.

its a very interesting pov, to say the least. my heart almost shattered cause i thought they were going to part ways...

haha i've thought of that once but forgot it, glad you wrote a story like this, IT'S SO TRUE!

The girls never seem to understand do they? ah so sweet!

Wow, would not have expected that.

Great insight. If they werent destined lovers, would they have fallen in love.

Very nice one-shot. )

Is that all? As to them being in love only after they discovered the truth about their past selves, the thought/supposition through out the fandom is that Darien always was drawn to Serena and called her Meatball head/ and teased her was to hide his true feelings. did that make sense? oh well, no matter. Great story (as a one shot), and if not a one shot please continue

Cute perspective!

That was funny & cute! its different from most takes, most ppl show that they loved eachother & the teasing was just to hid it, then it was simple once they got together- but this one makes sense too esp. with what the anime shows!

super adorable i totally loved it !

aah sweet! i so luv ur stories. very sentimental but warming at the same time...very touching..and they bring in a different aspect of the relationship of serena & darien. ur one-shots are all superb, the way u manage to make them...it's hard to single a story out into one chapter and have it sitll have essence. great job, and i'm lovin it!

I really like this realistic output. Hoping for more!

I enjoyed your story. I would think that they'd struggle between their past and present selves, and I think you handled that well. The story seems complete to me, why isn't it marked as complete on

Hawaiian-Plumeria

loving this fic! new side to it i enjoyed it being told this way