The "reveal" was kinda stupid, Shadow/Clyde wouldn't fall for something like that too easily.

haha, I knew Shiva was there since you dropped hints about the cold weather and all. Poor Edgar...he's really not that bad.

Ouch. Poor Edgar, being hit in the groin by an esper...how amusing.

I would've thought that Celes would cast an Ice spell instead of Fire one, but oh well.

Up to now, this is the first only FFVI fic I've readed. Before I had readed them on Crossovers, and finally I decided searching for a story that involved only FFVI.

I am mostly glad I found yours.

I've been reading non stop for several days and... awesome. Its a true masterpiece.

Can't wait to read the 2nd part.

¿Will Relm find out that Shadow/Clyde is her father?¿Will Terra become her new mother?¿Will there be a time skip like when Kefka destroyed the world for the first time?¿Will Cyan punish his traitors?¿Will they fight Maduin?

Awesomeness...

Heh... Good story. I hope you can continue it.

Sry 'bout not reviewing earlier, but this is a very good work that got what it deserved at last: Attention

Aww, what a way to end it :( Looking forward to the next one. I hadn't checked back in a while and was surprised with how much was done since I last checked. You planning to start the next one soon, or are you taking a break?

I still can't believe Celes did that to him though x( That was cruel. At least the others who figured it out before understood his feelings and let him keep his secret until he chose to reveal it.

Aw man, I hate clifhangers...Great story, though there are still so many unanswered questions, like who actually is Thomas, why is he so hell-bent on this, the relantionship between him and Kefka...the list goes on. Hopefully your next story clears up the loose ends! Good job, and I salute you!

Aww, man! When that happened in the game we were able to play immediately -.-... Mann, this chapter was EPIC. I really really loved itt D Definitely my favorite The action and the description of the apocalypse were amazing.

Haha, I so can picture Relm with a sword, lol. I have another question though- Will you post the next chapter as Chapter 35, or will you start another story? Anyways, I'll look forward to it

Hahaha, yess i doo. Very good idea with the crystal tear. Geeda's just getting stronger and stronger O.o

Very action-packed chapter, I like it! Update soon!

Gee...what "good" friends...Shadow practically saved them a couple of times, and now he gets a "You're a selfish *!" Humph.

Remember, keep posting the stories, they're are my lifeline, the Mako to a Soldier, and etc..._V

Another amazing chapter D Interesting story for Gogo..er..Daryl. I like it. Very mysterious.

Oh, Celes. When she said Shadow's name I wanted to kill her. I mean, this whole time I wanted Clyde to tell them himself, and she had to trick him. Urggh now everyone hates him. Fortunately though, by the end of the chapter everyone has forgiven him... but I think it'll take a while longer for Terra.

Hmm.. The Ancient Castle. Sounds like an ultimate-showdown kind of area. Hopefully they'll beat Geeda for good here D Looking forward to next chapter! I think this was one of my favorites so far.

Aw, man... I love this. I'm your fan and I want the next chap... T_T All this thing about Shadow/Clyde made me want to write a story about him too, and I already have an idea! I just have to start writing, and when I star publishing it, I will give you credit for the inspiration -

And now, to the thread... Is Tomas Geeda a descendant of Odin and this queen from the Ancient Castle, I guess? Wahtever... I'll wait 'till it's updated n_n

Congrats, bud!

Wow, that was...messy...good story though! Keep those chapters coming!

However, I have to admit that by now, I really REALLY wanna know who Thomas Geeda is. I have an inkling, but with no definite evidence, save for one, I'll keep my teories to myself.

Remember, keep posting those stories!

Ok, guy, let me see... I'm Spanish, so my English is not really good, ok? But you're always "begging" for coments to continue this, so here I go:

THIS IS AWESOME! Man, I love it! I love Shadow but I love Clyde as well (yeah, I think about them like two different characters). The truth is that I love the whole game and your fic it's just great.

It's too late right now to keep reading, so I'll continue tomorrow from chapter 17th and, if i can, i'll leave you another review when I finish 'cause, you know, I've read half the story in just one night and I'm a little tired (if not, i wouldn't stop).

Congrats, man. You're the real thing.

O, I can't wait to see what Tom really wants! The next few chapters are gonna rock, I know it. This chapter was great too, I can't wait to read on!