Aaaahhh! come on! you had to stop at that moment and with a major cliff hanger! you have gotten better from the first chapter till now. please hurry and post the next chapters!

Jeez, those feels, dude... You certainly have improved over time but don't leave me in suspense, buddy! Please finish this thing. My ps2 has long since conked out and this is how I get my Blaze\Nagase fix!

I've only read this first chapter and I am already intrigued with the history of Blaze and how this will effect your telling of the game. I very much look forward to reading the rest of this story as well as any other stories you may have as recommendations. Great start.

Bruh, no way a F-4 is going to outfly a SU-37

Bruh, no way a F-4 is gonna out fly a SU-37

Absolutely awesome writing, hope you can finish this story soon!

Hello, I like your story very much. Are you going to continue it?

Holy flipping shit Batman! You are an amazing writer and I hope you are still writing this! This might just be one of the best stories I have ever read!

I must say I hope you update soon, the action and pace of the story is really coming along well.

About time and I was hoping for a little more with choppers death but still keep up the good work. Don't make me wait to long for the next chapter.

I love this story and the suspense of knowing what is coming up next is just killing me! Though there are lots of gramatical errors here and there but the story just kicks the grammars ass and says 'get the fuck out'. I like it and you might want to improve on your grammar but the story is just wonderful. Keep up the great work

Me lickey long chapters... I think I read up to 11 last night reading only 4 chapters XD but how you made Blaze's past interests me. It is as if he is one of the offspring's of the Demons of Razgriz. For it's like he has two different mind sets, one for thee ground and the power of maybe part demon in the sky... or I might have read too many AC5 fanfics and played over... lets say 600 , maybe 500 or less, hours worth of Ace combat. Props for epic story and really looooonnnnggg chapters.

this is GREAT!

This is the best ace combat fanfic out there bar none, it captures the real feeling of AC5 in a way that no other does. You must continue this! I love how you write Blaze and Nagase, their romance feels real, and the action is superb.

Very good story and writing, I think this is the only good Ace combat story about Blaze and Nagase around.