Reviews for The Third Quadrant
sprinklesofbbrae chapter 23 . 8/28/2016
k so i would never actually say this was bad but it is the truth, you do need to work on endings. Dontt worry, i am bad at them too. ;-)
i dont need bleach but thats very nice
keep writing i have a idea for a different ending, if you want-
raven finally is rid of trigon forever when she like kisses bb cuz didnt it mention that like love is the most powerful emotion!
and then so bb wakes up and teh blood and gore & whatnot evaporated in thin air and they kiss and bluh-bluh-bluh cuz well whatevs
so trigons done forever and they go home and everybody naturally is all like 'oh we are so happy to see you again we thought you were gonners and stuff'
then bb and& rae get like married, jk theyre too young way too young
so anyways they dont get married but they recuperate in the med bay and then it says like its about 10 months later and they go on date so you get it, right? amiright? and so then you take it from there
you are good at descriptions and stuff but like i said use the gloom-and-doom with caution, k bae? :-)
anyway Sia Cheap Thrill haha
Jelamy chapter 23 . 1/15/2016
Great story. Hope to see more bbrae in the future
Wikked Grin chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
I like it. This is a new side to Raven, and yet, it seems to fit her perfectly
Tidal chapter 23 . 1/16/2014
clorox would hurt... eyedrops,maybe? It wasnt bad. It could have been better, but it was not bad.
Lunawolfmoon2 chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
I really like the bible verse you put in.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/24/2013
OMG love your fic! Thanks for writing!
Shadowhawx chapter 17 . 4/28/2011
Ugh
Shadowhawx chapter 14 . 4/28/2011
Beast boy is a nieve (I spelled that wrong) little retard! Most of the time...kinda
Shadowhawx chapter 14 . 4/28/2011
Beast boy is a nieve (I spelled that wrong) little retard!
ravanwolf chapter 23 . 4/23/2006
Don't hurt yourself, I liked the ending. It was a brilliant story that took ages for me to read, but who cares about me? Good story.
Teva chapter 23 . 3/24/2006
Wow, great story! They are a little Ooc though. But still GREAT.
Missing a Member chapter 6 . 10/6/2005
can u say oh gosh? thats wat im saying... good job tho.
TopKat chapter 23 . 9/8/2005
love it! omdg, thankyou for writing this! LOVE IT SO MUCH!
realfanficts chapter 23 . 8/25/2005
Hi! I've recently stumbled across one of your stories, and been reading all the others! I especially like this one, and since you asked, I think you SHOULD post a sequel!
itdontmatta.finePrince V chapter 23 . 8/5/2005
the ending was fine! plz dont replase it its actually pretty good
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