Okay, I know it's been ages and this fic is abandoned, but I just want to say that it is SO GOOD, and thank you so much for writing it. I love how you write Van and Hitomi's relationship, the great partnership that they have, and I love that the personal conflict between them only lasts for a single chapter and from then on, all conflict is external. My favourite thing to read is my OTPs tackling stuff TOGETHER, and you just delivered that so well. I will definitely be rereading this fic.

Great beginning. I can't wait to read more.

good so far, but a question: if this is five years later, then why is hitomi (who was 15 and would now be 20) still in high school? :S

-Rei

I'm very sorry to hear that this story isn't continuing. It's one of the better stories that I've read so far and I was looking forwards to seeing what would happen with the plot.

I hope that at some point you will be able to get the inspiration and motivation to finish, but as a fellow writer, I understand where you are coming from.

But regardless, it's going to be one of my favourites :)

Storm

If you're still on , please consider continuing this story. I know I'm not one to talk when it comes to unfinished fics, but pretty please with sugar on top.

Somehow, Cadoma reminds me of Smeagul/Golum from LOTR...

The story is very good. Too bad you haven't updated this for so long. Please write more soon!

Hey i read this story like a few years ago, and after i went to Scotland i couldn't find it anymore. I'm so glad i found it again.

I think it's the best )

Everyone are cheering for you to continue this story and so do I... I in love with this story..!

Will you continue this story?

Please...do it for everyone...

Because if you do..

you already make everyone happy...

Love ur story...please continue this story sweetheart...

I realise that with the length of time that has passed that you have abandon this story but I wanted to tell you that your writing is amazing. I was able through your words to picture every moment, its every breath and feeling.

I have added this story to my favorites in the hope that it will be finished one day. And even if my hopes are in vain so be it.

Don't ever stop writing.

since this story hasn't been updated in a year or so, then i presume that it's totally abandoned? or are you thinking of starting it up again? if not, do you think you can let me finish it? or pass it on to someone else? it started out so good! it's a waste of a fabulous story if nothing happens to it!

well, sorry, I meant her little brothers pov, sorry.

inkpot's muse

Well, just now i've read the whole ff 'the return' and I'm really amazed at your talent in writing this fanfic. It's so much better, than the average VoE-fanfiction... your words are flowing just right and I really like the way your stories are going...

But I'm also really sadened, by the fact, that you won't seem to continue this marvelous storyline

I wish to give you some creative power (better said: keep the muses flowing ;)) to write on soon

And last but not least, some of the questions and thoughts that are invading my mind, at the moment:

What could the raiders possibly do against escaflowne? Or does Sheahan still has an ace up his sleeve?

What is Hitomis family thinking about all this (I really, would like to see a part writen in their thoughts )?

For now, I'll be silent, so that you may think (hopefully soon) about the next chapter.

In amazement and adoration

inkpot's muse

ok it has been a year plz at least give it some kind of ending it is very well written and i would hate to c it aboned when it is at its prime.

Oh man.. I love your Dimensions story, and I love this one. I'll keep it on my alert list, and my faves!

Your story is very well written and has good detail and story line. I'm hoping that inspiration sparks soon, after all this is one of the worst places to leave off.

I imagine that the next chapter would be an epic battle with Sherezard and Escaflowne fighting. Has the enemy shown any guymelefs of their own? Can they prevent the city collapsing once again in flames? Will Hitomi's family still allow her to stay on Gaiah after witnessing such problems? Is the visiting princess hiding with everyone else?

Just a few questions to possibly help spark some inspiration. Good luck in whatever you choose to do.

~QueenTatooind