this is a great story! i would love to hear how the other side of the family is doing with the emersons! ha ha!

sorry , just commented

but ment to say

' as much as i hated lindsay in the show '

not story

your version was really good ;)

aww , as much as i hated lindsay in the story

and most fanfics

your interpretation of her was really good .

as well as the whole story it self ;D

i think im slowly becoming your biggest fan !

thanks so much for this story! it was excellent! you also did an amazing job overall with all the medical details! i was very impressed!

I had to catch my breath couple times, too. I almost started to cry several times. The end was just so beautiful. It made me want to sit by the ocean and watch the waves. I would even do that if we would have like... ocean.

It was great!

That was so good. The mugging was so good because it was so suprising. Wonderful story. More please.

Amazing... wow! What a story, I had to remind myself to breathe steadily...

Thanks so much, I'm now ready to work on some Ryan!angst myself, hee

Hi, it's me. This story just got mentioned in passing and I had to come read it again.

I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your Seth voice. I love his in-his-head asides and I think you always really capture him.

"People on TV were always skipping meals when catastrophe struck." I feel the same way, Seth. It's a rare day that I feel like skipping a meal. :)

What a great story. You are a very talented writer. The descriptions of the medical procedures etc. were extremely well-written - enough detail so that you could really visualise what was happening. I also want to praise your grammar, spelling etc. I was able to concentrate on the story because everything was punctuated properly - sometimes writers don't do this so well and the story doesn't flow as easily. Anyway, well done again - please write some more!

"I’m not really sure, he’s uh, got like three facial reactions and two of them involve being arrested.”

BWAH!

Upon reread, I think I love this more.

I just finished re-reading this story. It was really, really good. I really enjoyed it.

Why did you finish there! you must continue please! him coming out of hospital, the muggers bought to justice? lol! i over react sorry! great story!:D

Finally I finished this, and what a great happy ending. I loved how Lindsay thought he was the most beautiful boy she'd ever seen. I also loked how he'd asked for his mother when his head ached, that was a realistic touch. I so loved this story, I'm sorry it's ended!

Good god did i adore this story! You guys killed me so many times that i lost count.

(Or how we wrote a story with the sole purpose of which was to kick Ryan’s ass.)

and you did it so very very well. thanks is not adequate. . .

That bit with the breathing tube was written brilliantly. I've been on the edge of my seat!