Cute! Would have mentioned Alice and Frank though

Just a prob with this chap. Lily not being a great potioneer just makes the story a bit more unlikely.

Hey Secret Lily,
I was trying to find a nice story a few days back and came across this one... I took a screenshot of it so I could read it later... Today I was bored and looking through stories I haven't read and found this one I started reading it and haven't stopped (except for Lunch) and I have finished it in 2 hours... One word for this story: PERFECT! Hats of to such a great fanfictioner... I absolutely adore Lily and James! I have read some other Lily James fanfictions by this author named 'TecQueen' her Lily and James stories are 'An Unwanted Reunion' and 'The Powers Of A Demigoddess'... Please check out her stories and review them... 'TecQueen' deserves lots of reviews... Anyways I am steering of topic now! The only problem, and it wasn't even a proper problem was that at the name you have written on top for the story is "This Lullaby" (don't get me wrong I loved the story) I am just being picky, but I think you should know this! So where did you get the inspiration for this story? And will you please, please, please write an Epilogue about Lily and James Wedding? Anyways, I think a great author deserves the questions she asks to be answered so here:-

Question 1) Who was your favourite JKR character?
1) James and Lily

Question 2) Who was your favourite original character?
2) Leah, Erin and maybe Jenna...

Question 3) Which was your favourite chapter?
3) Not in the plans

Question 4) What was your favourite quote?
4)"That's where the matter of one's personal beliefs come in. I for one, believe that there is on special person for another. I think that some are meant to fall in love while others find it, but never really grasp onto it. Whether you do something about it, that's your choice. If you refuse to let it in, you probably will never find it" Indicated James.

Question 5) Who did you hate most?
5) Ethan

Question 6) Have you read "This Lullaby" by Sarah Dessen?
6) No I haven't.

Question 7) Have you read my other fanfictions?
7) Nope I haven't

Anyways I'll start reading your other fanfictions...
Once again great story,
LilyJamesForever

Seriously, don't the characters have flaws? You make them all seem as good looking as models. Even Lily wasn't the most beautiful, though she was cute. This is so stupid. You know, a flaw is like a trademark. Make this "rubbish" more realistic...

I reallllllyyyy like Sirius because of his many attempts to get James and Lily together. And I also like Leah and how you paired her up with Sirius. I didn't really have a fav chapter...they were all so good...but I think the one I like the most most was either chapter 18 or 19. Ohhhh I also hated Ethan. Hehe :) OVERALL I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! ~Fandom Potato

AMAZING!

this is an amazing story, you are a very talented writer, i wish i was good enough and had enough patience and talent to make my stories more than one-shots :( Lily and James are definitely my favourite pairing, i absolutely adore their love story and am extraordinarily jealous that i do not have a guy like James potter who is in love with me, then again i go to an all girls school and am 13 so... i guess i still have a lot of time to find love ;)

1.) Not sure... Lily maybe?
2.) Leah
3.) Finally I think? The one at the end where Lily and James finally got together and were acting like an old married couple (:
4.) "Lily and James getting married. This I had to see..."
5.) I liked Jenna, surprisingly. I hated Ethan.
6.) I haven't.
7.) I haven't yet but I certainly will (:

I just wanted to say that I loved it. I'm actually rereading this for the second or third time and just noticed the questions you had asked. I love reviewing (:
Great work,
Anonymouslol

My favourite original character was Ruby, and I love your story. If I could write half as well as this I'd be happy!

I have to say, this is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've read in a while. Its so sweet! _ I was kinda depressed when it was over... But then I checked your profile, and you have lots of other stories... :D Time to start reading.

Aww that was so cute!

Wow, I absolutely loved this! Thankyou so much for writing this, and please keep writing, you have a real talent!

WOWZA Interesting new take on their relationship well not so new but fresh enough that i kept reading thanks for writing

1 Marauders and lily ( can't choose one)

2 Erin

3 Finally

4 " I've been having this feeling" James

" What" Lily

" that we were meant to be together" James

( it's rather cheesy but it's sweet)

5 Ethan

6 haven't read it

7 haven't read them

1) Remus

2) Ruby

3) Chapter 18

4) "Lily and James friends? It's a crazy world we live in, Padfoot. I don't know if I'd want it any other way though."

-Remus

5) ETHAN

6) Yes i have. no i thought it was perfect (:

7) yep haha but im sure i'll read many more dont worry