I cant get the next chapter, is there a reason?

I can't believe that raven's father hurts her like that

I am happy that at least some one helped beast boy out

Ooooooooh. You just left me on a cliffhanger. But then again, I have been reading this nonstop.

Please continue this is great

One do u realise that there is not chapter 17

Omg one Major cliff hanger and two i expected more of a big finish for a kiss. I mean i didn't read a whole entire 15 chapters to just see this lazy finish. and u started it with a " ..." i mean that's even more wrong than what Trigon does.

Omg still no kiss, this is totally more of a RobStar story why not just name it that yesh.

Omg please say that this birthday party continues on chapter 14 because it has been a full 13 chapters and all Gar and Raven has been doing is blush 24/7. This story is a RobStar story. I NEED A KISS :.(

Umm BIRTHDAY KISS, BIRTHDAY KISS! hurry it up

If i was Raven's father i would for sure not say " What ever fine" when raven was about to leave the house. I get that he's a demon but that's even cruel for the worst person ever. and what wit the Roth thing, u don't even know ravens real last name...

One what does she mean by " Very, very hard,,," Because that sounds wrong and 2 please say that raven gets a birthday kiss on her birthday.

OK so i know i have made some bad reports in the past but i promise this is the last one. i didn't know any one of those songs in the story and i have the answer to that question that was worth points. The person Rich's Guardian is dating is Cat woman. And i'm amusing that Rich's Guardian is Batman.

Omg i had to stop at the point where Gar said " You'll do it Cuz you love me." i'm going back to read it now but i'm rlly nervous about how Raven is going to respond. _:(

finally there is some romance i was getting bored from chapter 1 through chapter 5.