Aw! That was short but very good! I loved it!

wow, remus lily is a new idea for me, but i like it.

goodly written, short, but to the point

There are a few spelling errors ("she stilled loved him" should be "still" and "simply stare" should be "simply stared"), but other than that it's a great fic. I love the simplicity of it, and the last line is killer.

Good work!

Wow! Please write more! I'm gonna go add this to my favs and look and see if you have anymore stories, you're awesome!

Keep writing!