I know I'm over a decade late, but please write more of this xD it's great

And the saddest part is that this gets filed away under "fics that I was really enjoying the plot to but hasn't updated in over 10 years and the author doesnt seem to be active anymore and is prolly all grown up and has more important stuff to do"

On the off chance that the author remembers this account and returns, I will follow this fic and would lile to let the author know I loved it. It's been a great ride and is a shame it never saw a conclusion. Now I have a love for Creepy Erol in a way I never have before, especially towards Daxter. I love the way you wrote Keira and am even sad that Arda and Durnam aren't real characters in the game. I Love the backstory of Daxter and his parents. I love what you characterized of Samos and Jak and Torn. I love the way you retold this story and if the hypothetical situation where I would be hired to write a reboot/cartoon/comic adaptation of Jak and Daxter, I can say for sure that the world you created in this adaptation of the J&D plot would be a huge inspiration for it. Dare I say you wrote the characters better than Naughtydog themselves! (Which isn't difficult sadly because Jak and Daxter feels like it was written for emotionally stunted boys who can't handle even a "Wow I haven't seen you guys in two years and I've been tortured and I am so damn happy to see you all again!")

I doubt you'll return to this after 10 years... but I'll have you know it's been an amazing fic and the cliffhanger it's left on and what will Erol do next will haunt me until the end of my days. I will literally be on my death bed wondering "so what was Erol going to do with that information about Daxters blood? Is Erol ever going to catch Daxter and use her as bait to get to Jak? Will Dax ever become a man again?" God I love this. So to you Author... great job. I never knew you before this fic... but seeing how long this has been innactive... I will miss you already.

You're not dead are you? Just found this fanfic and I LOVE IT! Please come back to it!

I feel so sad for Dax, his/her parents grew old and they never saw their son again. :(

That Dastard Erol, he feels up a paralyzed Dax. And THEN he has Vin snooping around in her DNA. THE GALL!

Erol that dirty Frig!

So cute, so, Jak always loved Dax. And poor Dax is confused, hope it works out.

XD That "Danger Zone" becomes a hilarious one-line in this show Archer.

Dang, this has been on here forever, and I so LONG to see it updated!

And here where, much like in the original, Dax steps up to do the race :D

Love how you made it so Dax would still ride i nthe race D:

That Erol is a PIG!

And he's such a A-hole, tormenting Jak. If ANYONE is a freak, it's him.

I like Duran, he's a cute addition.

And Keira, she's got a good sick sense. And she just FEELS that Erol did something, and she's not gonna like it when she finds out.

XD One minute, Sig is thinking Dax is hot stuff in a schoolgirl skirt. (Dang that man riles me up good. I mean thta he's hot) And the next, he's threatening to whoop her butt for playing chicken with him and the metalheads.

Thou, that doesn't mean he's not still attracted. XD But she might kill that soon enough with her mouth.

Love this.

ROFL Tess's comment, and Dax's horrified response.

"You can bounce a quarter off it."

Daxter rescues Jak, only for him to act all mushy on him...her, and then they fight about 'killing.'

Turning her female has made her a LOT more different than being furry :)

Poor Dax. Taken advantage of like that, if that doesn't turn her off guys more, well, considering she was male. But hey, I'm getting ahead of myself, expertly done chapter.

It's a pity that erol is so handsome, and yet a complete and utter A-hole.

Unfortunately for Dax. It was the truth.

Hmmm~ Intriguing, daxter's already gotten herself into some crazystuff :D