Reviews for The Four Apprentices |
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Just William chapter 24 . 7/14 A quite interesting and different story. Just a number of wrong words, typo's or miss-spellings that need correcting. |
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 24 . 1/4 Another great story. Thanks so much for sharing! |
IOpenAtTheClose of your life chapter 16 . 12/5/2019 Im well aware this story is barely younger than me but damn, take it easy on Tonks haha |
Lordlexx chapter 7 . 11/26/2019 An Englishman using a katana... I admit, I like your variety in your stories but this one is a little out there to me. |
sylvelle chapter 24 . 10/24/2019 It was a satisfying ending. I probably would not like an earlier version but I like Hermione and Harry. Excellent work as always. On to the next. Thank you gor sharing. |
sylvelle chapter 21 . 10/24/2019 Of course she should have and had Ginny not flipped out she probably would have had no choice. Ginny is formidbile and equally as stubborn as her mother. But she blew it! She abandoned Harry when he needed her most but she is 15 and coddled by her fsamily. I can believe she could do this and then realize her disastorus mistake and crumble. |
sylvelle chapter 17 . 10/24/2019 NEVER doubt you! Well probably not anyway. Great story. I'm pushing 72 hard December. and your Harry is deliciously perfect well mostly. Love him. Thanks. And thank you for your feedback too. |
sylvelle chapter 16 . 10/24/2019 Dumbledore ? WOW |
sylvelle chapter 15 . 10/24/2019 Is Ragnot the same as Ragnok? Do you always use him? Just curious. My brain stumbles over the name when it appears. Of course it is getting old and sometimes confused. Loving the story. |
sylvelle chapter 12 . 10/23/2019 Why? Why Charlie? The ost Ron, we lost Luna now Charlie. |
sylvelle chapter 10 . 10/23/2019 Thank you for not killing Dobby. |
sylvelle chapter 9 . 10/23/2019 Thank yiu for cuing us that Dobby saw them. |
AiyaKnight chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 You spent the last entire book making Ginny grow up into this person who Harry wanted over no other and then after you make her become this smart, sexy, empowered woman life partner for him you let her act like a 5th year jealous hating school girl again and for no reason that I can see along with her hateful mother who loved harry like a son?! You just let them do the whole, we hate you now because of shipping plot. I enjoy H/Hr more than anything else but idk If i can agree with you on this ending. Nice Story. |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 18 . 9/18/2019 Really enjoying the story and its prequel. |
odonnellzoo99 chapter 24 . 8/25/2019 Excellent ending! Thanks, Odzoo |