Wow this is cool. Really, how could you come up with this idea and construct it so well? Now that you’ve made this comparison, I’m glad Hikaru was chosen by the God of Go instead of Shinigami and met Sai who was kind and loved him. I wonder if Kira can’t kill Hikaru with Death Note because he’s sort of protected by another God and his fate shouldn’t be disrupted. That would be super cool.

Wow. This is such a cool story and so interesting! Great job!

This is an interesting crossover. I really like both manga. They have their similarities, but they're very, very different stories. It was a good read, and interesting in how Hikaru analyzed Kira with what little he knew, and Light did the same for Hikaru.

Wow this was just amazing. Great job pulling this off! Edge of my seat the entire time!

Very nicely done! It was interesting to see these two canons brought together briefly and I thought you did it very well.

This is gold , so happy I found this fic . None of the characters were ooc and it was so very interesting (though ,you should know that Hikaru did play soccer ) . Anyway , it was quit an enjoyable read (logical too ) .Good job , keep it up !
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this is lovely! I want to read more of them ;)

This is awesome, yay for Hikaru being so perceptive... although his comments really hit the mark, I'm not too surprised Light/Kira doesn't want to acknowledge that... now, if he realised the parallels AFTER that whole Thing with L and standing in the rain and Rem... irony.

Interesting. I like it, very very much. This makes me wonder, if this story isn't a one-shot but is going to follow Death Note through the end...I wonder, what would happen, what kind of impact would Hikaru have on L, Ryuuku, Light and the other characters...

Very interesting... often, Death note is compared to chess... but the go comparison works equally well, in a different way... Great story! XD

Hello, I loved your fic, especially because I love Hikaru, I liked to see how Raito or Light Hikaru can understand something (since no one can) and vice versa, it's a shame that was not found with L or Near , Mello or Matt, I'd hate to see their reactions to Hikaru, I hope they do more fics, keep it up, thank you and kisses.

I really like the characterization, well done!

Wow, that was great. I had never thought of those comparisons before.

There are also many changes that could be made to make this scene far more interesting. Have L also be there to hear Shindo's ideas. Have Sai be nearby, who may point out Ryuuku to Shindo.

You're right that both series don't mix well together, but for one shots like this, it can make a great encounter.

This is really cool. It really makes you think. You should make a sequel where after light goes, on the way home, Hikaru tells Waya howhe thinks its all going to end.

It's interesting to see how Hikaru and Raito would react if they happen to run into each other, even though it was written on Raito's POV. Well written and two thumbs up for the story flow, grammar, and the idea. d(_)b