I read all of this on Adult FF and wooooow amazing. I am not a fan of NejiHina or incest but this was sad and beautiful at the same time. Asshole Neji for how he treated Tenten but thank you for having her actually respond pissed off and make him own her forgiveness, since many other fanfics tend to just brush down insults and reputation damagings all for the sake of “le ships!”

Again, not a fan of incest or NejiHina, but that ending broke my heart for poor Neji...Bittersweet ending, really, as he could touch and caress but never truly grasp Hinata, who he wished to have but sadly cannot ever, same with his conflicted feelings for Tenten as well. Lovely read.

I fucking loved this story.

If people ask me if in this fanfic, I prefer Nejiten or Nejitem?

The answer is:I couldn't careless.

Applause. This is a truly good read. The twist with Hiashi was weirdly amusing. Somehow I'd like for Neji and Hinata to end up together (the reason why the story caught my interest).

Hinata's feeling of betrayal was a tad too late, with all the things that happened between her and Neji. Seemed a bit forced.

The end though, like with Neji, gave an odd sense of relief. With it being out of the usual romantic route.

Oh! I've been wondering why Neji's father would need to be trained when the heir was Hiashi, a guy. So that's why. Oh god.

Ohhhhhhhhhh...Savage!

Say what?! 0.0 He's a whore?!

Okay so, I was drinking a glass of water, right? Now why did I choke when I realized where Neiji was? Omg! Classic! xD

It's called a yaoi warning. You know so people who don't like it,wont read it. You should put them in the story description.

I have no words at the moment my mind is just blanck. when i looked for the story i was hoping to have a happy relationship with a future together but i have to admit that even do it's not what i wanted to read it was just sooo amazing. You made Neji a prostitute, hiashi was gay i mean the whole OoC was so original so amazing. The "training", temari looking for fun nights was really really amazing. Was such a great fiction Congrats.
Kiss.
Dan

hmmm. I just gotta say if neji and Hinata had not mutated children, they'd be gods(:

wow i love it you story was really amazing a loitle bit

hot and exciting and a tiny bit romantic

i had wanted hinataq and neji together it doesnt matter

for my whether they are bro and sis or cousins they

are my #1 couple in naruto thank you for writing i

would be happy to read more from you with that

pairing

...

O.O...

uh...HIASHI'S GAY-mwaha I have been waiting for that moment forever...

not, uh, like that though...sorry )

Dear goodness,

In the midst of studying for my chem finals I decided to read this gem of a fic. I adore the story for what it is; terribly glad that Neji changes at the end. It is brilliant how you chose to write out each character in this story. The whore, being a "whore", has the most knowledge Neji's situation (from start to end). Hinata is the "main" romantic interest for Neji, but never fully complies to the role. It's a beautiful story, how Neji is so to speak a Dorian Gray. He cares only for himself and no one else, even with Hinata. He could care less about her happiness and decisions. It's funny that he's in "love" with her; she has been the only character to disregard his selfishness.

And all this leads to the ending, (which I found utterluy adorable) and proof to Neji's change.

You just gotta love the Neji-Tenten friendship. I admire it, how it's the story of two people going off the deep-end, but are able to save themselves in the end. It was just really freakin' cute. Cause in the end even if you're a physco maniac sex fiend who's committed incest, your friend has still got your back (and possibly more...;P ).

I loved it.

Major Kudos : )

i normally don't review much especially when its a really good fic because first of all i wouldn't know how to put it all in words, you know. Another would be that im probably in shock that its DONE!

Gosh, it was so amazing. when i checked the reviews you were given, i was so surprised they weren't all praises.

And one even had the audacity to say that she had an idea just like yours. Trust me, she got nothing on you. (and i've checked her stuff out so rest assured im not just kissing your ass ;)

anyway, love it to bits.

Muah! :*