I like so far can't wait for next update!

*Waves Cloris flag* GO YOU! lmao I love Cloris fics heh!

Great plot reali like it n it's v/ original lol keer up the good work.

Oh n have read Need Me, Need you loved it too.

*adds 2 fav authers* YOU are a gr8 writer!

Wonderful. I love this story, it's very well-written and is a very original idea. Lovely! D

Please update soon, I eagerly await the upcoming chapters.

~Oddishness

Oh god, this is so good. That's it, I'm baking you cookies-no! Fudge! Yes *sends hugs and fudge* please update soon :)

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE an um UPDATE!

Hey!

I really liked your story and I can't wait for your next update. The whole "conspiracy" about latching on to Cloud is amusing.

Mara

Awsome! I love it!

I'm really curious to see where you're going to take this. Update, please?

This story is so awsome! I luv it!

As you have mentioned several times before, this is a true AU. But your characters remain perfectly in character. Aerith is portrayed just as she should be. Cloud is precisely the way I would envision him as a father. It's wonderful.

Also, your writing is some of the best that I've seen on It's rare to find someone even capable of formulating a complete sentence on this website. Because of that, I applaud you.

On a final note, I must admit that you first came to my attention when I was reading over Yuna Strife's story, "Light in a Dark Soul". I was shocked that she was able to attain so many reviews and was tempted to review with crude remarks of her immaturity and pathetic writing. But you already did that. P LoLz, and it just made me really happy. Haha. I didn't want to give her the benefit of another review, so I just ignored her story and looked at your review with gratitude. Thanks.

Anyway, I hope you continue with this story. You're a terrific writer. See ya.

Ahh.. Cleris. But why'd you have to make Cloud married? (( That makes me feel kinda depressed. Aeris might not feel completely comfortable engaging in a romance with someone previously married, y'know.

Oh well. It was well written, there were no bad techiniques, 'n you had a wide vocab. I sound like my English teacher... anyway, well done. _

SD

Yay, finally! But... Cloud has kids? Oh good grief! XD I can't believe he got with someone else first. _ Oh well... -_- Pretty story, if not for that fact. Who's his wife? Don't say Tifa. Yeah, Aerith has brown eyes now but still... Anyway, try your best to update!