interesting
a good fanfic/

An excelently written angst fic, that will most likely never be updated. But hey, there's always hope.

It's a newer crossover.

Very well written story.

Although I'm not really sure where this story is going, I guess thats part of the mystery, but still it seems like the basis for the story has still to be explained.

Anyway, Intriguing story, I hope you finish it.

I am glad that things have worked out for you and wish you the best of luck in your life.

This was a good chapter and I loved the drama and realism in emotions. I look forward to the next update, whenever that will be.

This is a very good fic so far and I can't believe that I missed it until now. I hope you will update it at some point.

Your fic was recommended to be another another and that, expecialy in this community. Is a high priase.

I have also found this intriguing. Though I have found the pacing a bit frustrating, I still have a strange deisre to see what happens next. What subtle twist you incorporate next. I can also defineltey appreciate your gift of prose. I think my favorite scene so far has been your dream sequence with Rei and Chibi-usa, very cool. I hope that you continue to work on this story. My encouragement is also enthusiaticaly given.

I think Leper Messiah was trying to tell you to post on w dot evafics dot org. I don't think he knows you can't post urls on ffnet anymore.

Oh, and I like your story, too. _

Signed - Mouse.

You should try submitting your work to since this one has potential to be really good even though some folks might cringe because of it being a crossover.

6k first getting Random 1377 out of his writing nook to comment and so positively on your story is utter gold to most Eva readers AND writers. That is why I read this.

And he was right. At first I confused hotaru From SM with the one from Escaflowne, but that went by the wayside as the SM references started floating by.

The idea that SEELE needed to have another Angelic of sorts in this is worth a look as well as Hotaru's reaction to the other pilot and the boy she slid into earlier.

Great job so far!

dennisud2015

It's not often I'm reduced to the state of drooling fanboy, but I'm afraid I was giggling like a schoolgirl when I noticed that your story had been updated. As with the prior two chapters, this one is excellently rendered, and oh so very angsty, a combination, I must admit, that had me gleefully turning pages when I should have been doing work. I am quite enjoying the pacing this story has - a sedate, subtle, quiet buildup... words rarely associated with my own, brash, cantankerous fiction. I am intrieged by Hotaru, and though I still don't know all that much about Sailor Moon, I do know a little bit about this particular senshi, and I must say her placement is quite masterful. I'm very grateful you chose not to have oh, say, Usagi popping up in Tokyo-3. That would, I think, be a touch on the cheesy side. I look forward to your next update.

-Random

Well, damn. I feel outstripped and impotent.

Suffice to say I can't really bring myself to write anything after reading this, because this is possibly the greatest example of excellent writing I've found in ages. And there hasn't even been any Eva characters in it yet. Damn.

Very interesting, got me curious. Is Hotaru an replacement for Nagisa? Did she meet Shinji? Will ths angst come to an end? ;)

Consider yourself watched.

My, but you paint a grim little picture, don't you? Questions raised, dark hints planted left and right, answers a person may not want to get looming just out of sight. Quite enticing, all of this... I look forward to more. I don't often read the work of others, as I find it tends to influence my own writing, but I'm afraid your engrossing story is going to have to be one of the exceptions to my rule. I always appreciate it when a writer can paint with words rather than simply stringing them together, a talent I fear I have never quite mastered, so I will be checking for updates from time to time to see how this is coming along. If you're looking for encouragement to continue this story, consider it enthusiastically given.

-Random

I've only seen 2 episodes of Sailor Moon, so I don't know much about our young protagonist, but I know good writing when I see it. Some nice imagery in this one, and just from the first few pages, I like the feel and direction, and angst is always fun when done right. I'll be looking for chapter 2.

-Random