This is so hilarious! The clinical, sardonic, and clear tone of voice is awesome. You describe Rukia's drawing process so well that it's easy to picture exactly what is going on and feel like she is narrating the process in that... Rukia Kuchiki way.

what a hilarious series!

I like your style of writing. Isshin finding out the truth later would have been nice, but his assumptions were funny. The other chapters were good too!

Love this! The part about being secretly romantics at heart and Then again we could all just be sadists at heart.
So true

Confused. Nuf said.

Hi dear! This is such a hilarious story, the analogy you put to relate them to positive thinking, is soooo funny in such a subtle way :D I really do laugh, this is so entertaining! I wish you're still on a roll :) and have many tricks ahead on your sleeve! Happily waiting for more,

I'm loving your scientific articles! You could not have found more fitting test subjects! Keep going! I'm anxiously awaiting the results of your next experiments!

interesting idea :)

Haha, everything about this is funny.

wow this was very interesting xD A very enjoyable read xD really cute too :3

hahahaha! This was so funny! I luv your writing! It also sounds very professional. However, I would like to point out that Rukia would've used the memory loss thingamagig on whoever found out that she lived in the same house as Ichigo. Also, how would've people found out that Rukia was living in his closet? She wouldv've used speed stepping to run out of the place when she found out that somoeone tried to get in the room. But overall, I admire you deeply. (plz dont kill me like Aizen did to MoMo X))And I admit that I would never had wrote anything concerning IchiRuki as well as you did... due to the fact that I just started watching the series, and I am only on episode 6_... I forgot what episode I was on... As you can see, I like using elipses a lot... anyways, I do not think that you are a lazy turd! You are so awesome! Plz write more about IchiRuki! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Great story so far. I love how you made it all like a science report paper. So original. Too bad you didn't continue this.

this was it?

well, anyhow

it was good

i can totally see how you must have shook your brains to write this well with such words and with thus a context.

good job!

~sayume214~

one word: AWESOME!

Soon Ichigo realizes he looks like a moron arguing with thin air. xd. that was just so funny!

i love this idea, quite original indeed!

you're good! your dry, detached, report like tone feels like reading artemis fowl. great job! i like your writing style.