normally, others have written D showing up his leon's deathbed. but i really appreciate that you did it at his funeral, and with D just hiding in the background. and it was in second person! well done!

so sad! But really good! Please keep up the great work!

so sad...I always love reading this story...

T_T

Beautiful...

but it make me cry.

just one thing: a little too many 'see'...

*sniff* thats really a good story i really liked it *sniff* im a sucker 4 sad stories i cry easily good job!

~kit

Wah! Its so sad. I love it. Beuatifully written and you have my respect, which may I add is a very hard thing to earn.

*sniffles and boldly tries to hold back tears* I will...not...cry...

~ Rena! -

Great Story, I love the references to vol.10, just a tip, try to take out a good number of the "see"s

That was good. Really good.