Reviews for Twelve
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
Sorry but wtf?! Sakura is nothing. Shes ugly flat chested with an ugly personality and rotten temper. Shes a billboard brow and a traitor to her friend ino. After everything poor ino did for that selfish slut and sakura ends the friendship over a stupid guy! Im just thanking everyone that no one was covered in shrouds. Hokage saved them!
Tobee chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
SCARY!
StillIRise chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
Great story.
A Midsummer chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Despite her flaws, she's a bit too smart and perceptive for her own good. A much more darker perspective that sheds light to Sakura without the fan girl attribute and love sick persona.
HappyDeathFairy chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I loved reading this story! It was really amazing!
azurelegance chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
wow you've got Sakura's characterization down. REALLY. I loved this. It's so well written and I loved how you can just feel what Sakura's feeling. Excellent, excellent job :)
The Nameless Pharaoh chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Very good story! The ending kinda seemed a little "rough" and stopped too quickly, but who cares cause the story was amazing! 10/10 :D

~SasukeUchihasGuardian
waiting4morning chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Very nice. I love Sakura centric pieces that aren't romance; there aren't enough of them. :)
cherryblossom001 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
poor sakura :(
Alicia of the Temptation chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
It could've been better if you wrote something called "Thirteen", a fanfiction set after the Chuunin Exams about what Sakura felt.
Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
ive never really thoguht of what Sakura went through, i adressed it, but never considered it, so this was very interesting, and eye-opening. i think ive avoided reading fic about her primarily because i sympathise with her quite a bit. ANYWHO wonderful job capturing what it must be like to be a regular growing girl and a killer (who isnt very good at killing). s: im favoriting like, all of your Naruto stuff xD
Seriously Yours chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Excellent ;)
Sienna Maiu chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
I really don't know what to say... I mean, I liked it in a way and want to be able to comment in a helpful and curteous way... and it's not even that I'm so aghast I can't speak... it's because I don't know... you've already said everything there is to say.

Do you know what I mean? It's like there can be nothing else I could add (except for maybe that it's been so nice recently to be seeing so many stories which are well written in all the ways it can be-spelling, grammer, structure) And somehow... I feel like I'm not in a place to comment.

*sigh* Maybe it's just that I'm tired and I'm leaving you this inept response... but I'm really getting to thinking from your story here, that I need to backtrack and watch the entire series again.

I think I'll read your profile, perhaps there I can be inspired to leave something nice/inspiring :P
brjosk chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
_ Nice!
MnlLolita chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
I love it. You're really good with the characters.
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