Brilliantly subtle. You don't have to say desperation for it to be strongly felt-and the profound grief of doing what's right and hating it-and the feeling of smallness, sorrow and aloneness. Brilliantly done.

Dude. DUDE. It was so angsty and so beautifully written and gods, I love your writing. So, so, so... keep on writing the RoyAi! Muffins!

- Selphie Anne

ps: Have I ever told you that you're my hero? xD

Damn. That was beutifully written. Bravo. Really, it was great. You write really good angst.

LWL

This story was... painful to read. But very good.

*grumble* You ridiculosly good fanfic authors giving me spoilers.

damnit.

holy hell it's amazing, though. Your writing style is just so descriptive without wordiness. I love it and can't wait to read the other stuff once I've watched the rest of the show...

I can't think of anything more I could say, so ... yeah. go you.

you deserve a lot more reviews than this...!

This... this was heart-breaking...

Even though I'm a fan of angst, I don't think I can handle RoyAi angst very well...

waddya mean they both stood trial for the same crime? is that something metaphorical for love?wha?

Holy Smacks! That was so beautiful! Sad... yet not to the point where I'm sighing in despair... but it was still very nice! I love this story very much! Wonderful job!

Beautifully written. Though by now, I should've learned to expect that from your work.

That was the best angsty/romance FMA fic I've ever read! Give yourself a pat on the back for using my favorite couple so in-character, and so perfectly...Now, I must go cry in the corner...

Hrm...pretty dang dpressing...but so well done. Great descriptions that really pulled me into the fic. Keep up the good work, I can't wait till your next story.

But if you don't stop writing this so well I'll have to believe it!

Beautiful.

Perfect as always.

Wow...very good. Tragic in the end. Not a tearing, obvious sadness either. More subtle, like a mutual understanding of one another's depression. That, I really liked.

Language was excellent; grammatically and in the way if flowed. Definitely top-notch writing. Good job.

Oh, hurray! I do so love your little ficlettes. XD Nice to see the court martial aspect, too. I have a fic (short T_T) about Roy being court martialed that I hope to get out by this weekend. Glad to see I'm not the only one that's considered them being punished. D Great job, as always, and keep the RoyAi flooding in!