WOW, for a moment I was like 'what?... NOOOO!' but then it wasn't Charlie (thank god). Loved the Epilogue, I wonder whats been going on in Charlie's mind right there. Also I've imagined, if Charlie wasn't in DC for the while, but teaching a class, would Don burst into the classroom?...

Anyway, I really really liked that story, thanks for it.

Really good

Aww!

Oh my god. You had me crying and I was internally (everyone in my house is asleep) screaming "Charlie, NO WHY. Poor Don!" and then it changed again and I hate you but love you at the same time!

That was SCARY! My heart was in my throat as Don was approaching the body and I almost cried when he realized that it wasn't Charlie. And, the ending was so sweet.

that was great loved it

This was beautiful and sad. I loved Don's relief at seeing Charlie alive.

You almost killed me. I really though that was Charlie under that sheet. I even cried a little bit.

Your history is incredible! Congrats!

I really love it!

So beautiful! I love it!:)

I just found numb3rs on tv and here. I loved your story.

Great job, I was honestly going to kill myself for starting to read something so sad and then - the ending. Whoa, great.

Oh gosh. You really had me going there. my hands started shaking and I found myself gritting my teeth. You really scared me.

Don's anguish was palpable, as was his desperation while he tried to find Charlie afterward. Charlie's sudden fear at Don's greeting was heart stopping too. The suspense as Don tried to gather his courage to pull back the sheet was gut wrenching.

Excellent job.

Liked this!

I swear to God, I almost had a heartattack. *breathes again* The ending was simply adorable. I loved it. Great job!

AW!Had me worried. Excellent job