Omg. The fourth wall has been broken. I repeat the fourth wall has been broken!

This is such an amazing and inspiring fanfiction! I love ay-chans personality! I simply cannot wait until the next few chapters come out.
Ill also admit id love to see kurama snap into youko again.

The blue pineapples!

three damsels that aren't very distressed and a kitten, probably the best thing I have ever read in a long time. ahahahahaha

I tortured myself reading this. But I find it very hilarious so far.

Very nice, can't wait for Yoko to come out to "play" again!

BlackRose

So...I'm guessing you aren't finishing this fanfic, since it hasn't been updated since '05...

Darn. It was the only 'real person in anime' fanfic I ever liked.

Oh well, it was good while it lasted! _

I love this story! Though a bit random (but random is good) its still original, quirky and full of awesomeness! I hope you update soon!

Hmm, I was reading this, and when I got to the end of chapter eleven I was like "alright, can't wait for next chapter!"..then I saw you hadn't updated in like, foreva'. So then I got all sad, so now, like, wanna update, cause it is currently the only YYH fanfic that is feeding my senses O.o I thought it was good, and if life isn't to hectic, perhaps, make more goodness? :D pwease

I quite enjoyed the first chapter. Actually, it was the only bit of self-insert type fanfiction that I've actually enjoyed in memory. The second chapter was good too, but as I didn't really enjoy it as much, so (no offense to you or your story) I've decided to just stop reading here so as to preserve in my mind that self-insert can actually be done well - really well, in fact. Here's to the first part of "Realistic Fiction"! *toasts with imaginary glass visible only to self*

This is just great! Freakin' funny! I hope you update soon, .

I've read this before. It's been on my fav lists for a while, yet I decided it was time to reread it. And since I've started writing again, (albeit on fictionpress, *cough* as Rialet*Cough*Ifyouwantedtocheckitout,thoughyoudon'thaveto,...*Hackcough*...), I empathize with the desire for commentary and reviews.

I love it. Very, very much.

It would get repetitive if I retyped this for every review, so Just add that on to the beginning of every comment I make, ne?

Hiei vs the manga! Beware, it bites!

I bow down to you and the story!

But mostly you for writing this story!

THANK YOU! Please update! PLEASE!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, Now if that isn't the most amusing thing I've ever read I don't know what in the three-worlds is. Please, PLEASE! Update soon I have and can honestly, no doubt, undoutedly, completely truthfully, doubtlessly-(continues like this for about five or six hours till at last) say no state no scream for all the world to hear that this is tha absolute best story I have ever read. I love it more than anything I have every read before. Which is why I need to know something which is why I need to ask you something so that I can know the answer to it and no longer have to worry about being constantly annoyed, frustrated out of my mind, and eventually driven to the brink of insanity by it. The question of which I've no doubt you hate me for stalling so completly, utterly, and reasonlessy for other than in honor of the utter hillarity of your story is this: Your not one of those terribly dead awfull people who write a story put it up and don't updat practically what-so-ever after only a few chapters ARE YOU?

I wonder if it'll do more thanjust make everything go foggy. It make for a great hillarious scene.

Tell me Aya's going to stay a demon right I like her as a demon. She now has the ability to be able to annoy people even easier!-