I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Loved it! Brilliantly written!

I liked this story there should be a sequel he see her later on in life or she's in pitch black or tcor

I cannot get over how sweet this story is. Very very good job

I really liked the story. The girl wasn't like every other girl romance with Riddick. Every story I've read has some female version of Riddick that gets annoying. I liked that you took a normal person and placed her into his life.

Fanastic read. Lovely writting.

So. Very. Sweet. And not Mary Sue at all.

I love Riddick. He single-handedly carried Pitch Black, and there should be more good fic written with him in mind. Just like this one. More? :)

Nice, very nice.

The first word that popped in my head after I finished reading: AW! Seriously, this was brilliant.

i like her...

lol I love it!

i was afraid that this would end up being an OOC Mary Sue, but it worked... I reckon this is heaps mad.

No really!

Loveit!

Erisah

Wow, what a lovely fic!

The smut really got me going and I really got into Riddick's and Arenna's relationship in their short encounter.

Splendid job!

Thanks

Blue

Oh how perfect. Nothing could be more so. And a Mary Sue at that. But it was soo very VERY Riddick and soo very VERY right. (And soo very VERY WET! Hehehe.) I praise you and your mind.

Cheers Jen

Beautiful, that was totally brilliant writing!

AnGeL -x-

I was riffling through some archived stuff and found this. Normally I don't like Mary Sues but this one is so well written that i had to review. Wouldn't mind seeing something come of this, a sequel perhaps, or continuance? Maybe not, anyway, well done. ~Batty