| Reviews for Red Bolt of Lightning |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 6/21 Was harry's marauder name talin because of his form? |
 Krumplicica chapter 18 . 5/14 This fanfiction is older than me damn :00 |
| Matt chapter 11 . 2/27 Arthrimacy? What is that? The only thing even close in the books is Arithmancy. If that's what you mean, you're misspelling it quite badly. |
| Matt chapter 1 . 2/27 "gives you hell for loosing me" In order to "loose" him, Snape would have had to capture him first and then let him loose. What you intended, I believe, is "losing him" which has a different meaning and spelling. Also, have you ever actually read a Harry Potter book? Because there is no Night Bus in Harry Potter. There is, however, a Knight Bus. Again, different spelling and meaning. Maybe you need a beta for your writing before you post it. |
| Matt chapter 1 . 2/27 Amelia Bones is head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. She does NOT send out letters to Hogwarts students with their test scores! That's not her department. That would be someone in the Education department, or someone at Hogwarts. I don't know why you chose to sign her name to the letter, but it was a rather large mistake. |
| Jim Red Hawk chapter 10 . 10/7/2019 Harry IS related to the Black’s! I think his grandmother or great-grandmother was a Black. JimS |
| Andrew Peverell chapter 18 . 4/27/2019 Nice story mate! |
| mangamanic28 chapter 2 . 3/10/2019 weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *riding the cart going super Sonic speed* Love the story so far can't wait to see where you go with this story. |
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 18 . 1/31/2019 This story was just the right length and I’m excited to go read the sequel. |
| Katherine Rosalie Hale chapter 18 . 7/21/2018 Excellent story! A few typos, but nothing major. A must read series! |
| stylo1 chapter 7 . 4/12/2018 does it bother you that he is my heir? yes, i dont want to kill anyone so if it is his heir or not doesnt matter he just doesnt want to kill anyone. i gues you see where im going with this, you say one thing and awnser the next its like everyone is talking to themself did you sleep well yes breackfast was fine lets go to class yes im going to hogmeade best friends? sure, i hate you |
| stylo1 chapter 6 . 4/12/2018 nice a potiom that removes all trackers and wards etc, ofc if you first travel everywhere you gonna stay wait 2 days and then drink it its kinda useless. my brother sucks at potions and i useally sit next to him in class. that would almost make you a twin for sure seeing as how small the wizard world is its a piss poor choise. but why brother? why not friend? why not because i am brewing |
| Vampireking40 chapter 1 . 11/1/2017 Amelia actually has nothing to do with grades. She is head of law enforcement. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/9/2017 Sorry, just don't like the story line. This is a flame. It's like no challenges 4 harry. The love interest is a bit bland 4 me. I mean they act more like friends than potential love interest, everyone has the same personalty except 4 Dumbeldore and Voldemort. The only thing diffrent with each charcter is what they're going through and they're skills. Ron could be harry if he was taught by the founders and vise versa |
| HumANToid chapter 2 . 9/5/2017 it's Knight Bus by the way.. |
