PLEASE CONTINUE!REALLY CCUTE

this was so goood

I knew it! I knew she'd be a force to be reckoned with if they managed to turn her to the dark side.

Maybe I'm being overly critical, but I seriously think that that was a little bit rushed. It's just... I don't think relationships should be forged over the space of one chapter, even if that chapter spanned several months. It seems a bit forced. It's not a bad story though. I like it.

LOL great story so far!

I love this story! A jar of cookies for you!

great story! : )

Great update I cant wait to read more so please come back and update again son!

Very good chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

Sincerely,

~Flair Verona~

Dearheart, this is excellently wonderful in the most tipply giggly way. I am very impressed with your inventiveness . . . and with Hermione's and George's.

I also liked Fred's pompousness, for some reason. I got an image of Yogurt from Spaceballs saying "Moichandising!" and pulling out a flamethrower.

And the ending was superb, simply superb. No one wants to hear that, indeed!

You've improved since the last chapter. Marvelous!

lol I LOVE it! That was fabulous!

Come to TOAK! (Two of a Kind) This site is a Fred/George - Hermione Specific ship group, and is just starting out! Come check it out! Must be 18 or older, sorry.

Great start, update soon, it was quite funny very well written. very cute. :)

:)LetMeBreath;)

~Zana~

I love this, I really do, this is hilarious

I really enjoyed this story! Are you going to do more?

Sincerely,

~Flair Verona~