This is such a great fic please continue it!

Now, that was cruel! Ask us if we want to see more, and leave us hanging? Lol
Seriously, though, i hope you decide to continue this fic. Its has some pretty good dialogue!

Very impressive. I love the story. Please update soon

Great FANTASTIC work! I was engrossed! Great great work.

PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER! This is the funniest and most incredible AU story I've seen on this site!

We likes this. We want more. We want more. Everybody: We want more

Gargh! Update this! It's too brilliant to leave unfinished!

I like this. I like it.

Very very good. Its nice to see you've taken the story in a different direction. Now ypu've got a solid platform for a story keeping going! Well done.

Wow, I am hooked on this! Why stop now? Keep going! I love this, and I wanna see more Revan and Bastila. Plus, what happens after? You left the story hanging, and quite well might I add. But the main thing is: POST POST POST POST! Please!

Update, update, please! Please? I totally love this story!

Anna

Awesome story please please continue it.

If im lieing im dieing so im not not lieing i hope u come up with the next chapter soon

Someone get me Blue Max, I've got somethings that must be deleted! Okay, while my slicing droid is coming, I'll give you some feedback. 1st, your portrayel of Traya and Malak is exelent and totally in character. 2nd, the unkown worlds real names are Rakkata Prime and Lehon. (source: Darth Bane Path of Destruction.) 3rd, the blunted vibro blades Revan and Bastila are dueling with would cuase more damage than a proper training saber. (source: Yoda, Dark Rondevouz) 4th, the starforge is tied to a white dwarf star, not Lehon, so bastila should only be able to see it as a point of light if anything since she is sitting ontop a star. 5th, will Bastila never figure out she is only seeing Revan's good side not his bad or ugly traits, like cuting off Malak's hand. 6th, WHEN did you come up with the name Kayla? Becuase not two months ago I came up with that exact same name for the fifth protagonist of my Inason Chronicles. 7th, Revan beleived in the Sith rule of two as he records in his holocron that Darth Bane finds in Path of Destruction, so why are there three plus Sith Lords in operation at once? 8th, are the Force users not sensing each other and are behaving more like non Force-sensetives? 9th, Your Revan ought to have the charictaristic Sith aging all over his body. In the unmasking cutscene we see that the darkside DID start destroying his body. Also aren't blonde head models absent in the KotOR's charicter generation? 10th, will Revan and Bastila now form a Force bond the way they did Cannonically? 11th, well written, just remember that the darkside is selfish and the lightside is selfsacrificing, thus true selfless love is impossible for a real Sith. POST SCRIPT: Our spelling could both be improved.

You MUST continue! YOU MUST!

I love Revan and Bastila, and this is one of the few GOOD stories about them.

STOP TORMENTING US! PLEASE!