This is one of the sweetest stories that I've ever read. Good job!

I LOVED YOUR STORY SO MUCH THAT I'M GOING TO...TO...TO PUT YOU ON MY FAVORITES GET CRACKIN'.

Hm. I doubt anyone would be too harsh. That was quite sweet, I liked it. Good work.

i already know i reviewed your other two stories...i think that im going to become a current reader of yours from now on. I love the way you write...even if it isnt R... keep up the writing... no more oneshots! I want a long story.

i already know i reviewed your other two stories...i think that im going to become a current reader of yours from now on. I love the way you write...even if it isnt R... keep up the writing... no more oneshots! I want a long story.

okay, i didn't read the story, but i had to say this. how the hell is a yaoi fanfic rated g? honostly/

hello im new here but scince im a fan of Juvenile Orion i wanted to read this it wasnt stupid i was touched i guess i havnt really read enough issuse of it though but i loved the story. really touching

I didn't think it was bad. I thought it was really cute!