OK, what are you planning, exactly? and what's the deal with Falkner? I thouhgt you killed him off last chap!

Hmm, well, can you please get the next chapter up so I can find out what you meant by those semi-spoilers at the end of this chapter?

BTW, Team Aqua's leader is Archie and Team Magama's leader iod Maxie. If you need any more info., chnaces are that you'll be able to find it at so check it out!

OK, so Lorelei's finally going to get Allnian(sp?) to heal her Sneasel, Bugsy's got some kind of plan brewing, Eltan also has a plan brewing, people are starting to realise that it wasn't really Drago who attacked Violet and Giovanni ISN'T the leader of Team Rocket. What's going to happen next? Is Will going to turn up as an evil jerk?

interesting o.o

A very large but a very well, ok im no have time, but im read you cap, its good, and now I understand more englis

yap one growlithe mi favorite pokemon.

Bline the indigo champion? o.o wow

ok, i read you later

Cool, you took my advice.

Anyways,are you saying that the attack on Voilet was just a SKIRMISH? O.K, so maybe it wasn't hundreds vs. hundered but still...

Anyway (again), awsome story (Bruno's back in it & Stevens in it too)Is Will also coming into the fic? how about Koga or Lance or Karen? O.K., so maybe i do have kinda mini-crushes on the Elites (minus Karen, Pheobe and Glacia since that would just be gross) and so yeah, the more Elites, the happier I am

Im scary travel in airplane XD

good! im wait the next chapter, and the next appearance of Falkner XD, or one batle: lorelei vs Falkner ¿?

Ok, see you later!

PD: sorry, im have homework

alright, let me get this straight. So far, Lorelei's been attacked by a Haunter, attacked by an Ariados and a bunch of Spinaracks, her Sneasel is seriously injured, both her Geodude and Duskull have been killed by a Drago that she's now trying to kill without any pokemon, Violet City's been mostly demolished, Lorelei and Bugsy's plane has been hijacked and apparently one of them is about to be faced with a murder attempt and things are just STARTING to go downhill? i think that now's a good time for you to say, "Be afraid, be VERY afraid."

On another note, i read in a cookbook that airline food isn't actually bad, it's just a proven fact that for some reason, the higher up you are, the worse food seems to taste.

they got Scyther to mow the lawn? *Cracks up*

Anyway, i THINK i'm starting to get your idea of mass warfare and i am about to see how many people you're going to kill in the next chapter.

One word: wha?

Murkrow, for the life of it, cannot learn Crunch. By level or breeding. You're better off with Faint Attack. S'all I'm commenting on.

Don't worry if Lance no apear in your fic, im read for mi like (sorry im no have good ortograpy)

Yea this cap so good! more of Falkner apear (im like that guy!)

well, im read more, but im wait.

ok, im read you later! bye

Um...you know, Allnian doesn't really sound like the name of a POISONOUS Pokemon...sounds more like some uber-powerful other Pokemon instead.

there are a few small typos in this chap, nothing that a quick proof-read won't fix, though.

I like how your chapters are fairly long and are starting to get more action-packed. I'm looking forward to thye next chpater.

The next chapter for my fic should be up soon and then we can compare Loreleis.

im Back!

woho, great caps! and thanks by answering me Hobbit

Lorelei fan club t-shirt im want one, Lorelei im your fan!XD

Yep im wanted the next chapter, good job and bye

Pd: im a lance fan, he appear in the fic?

Um, just to let you know, the woman in Prof. Elm's lab says 'My SON Maya...' and then Maya shows up but you introduce her as a girl. You might want to fix that.

BTW, Lorelei running away from fansFUNNY!

I'm sure that this adventure will be nothing like i've ever seen (or read) before so keep on updating!

well, loreli's in quite a bit of trouble right now, isn't she? i'm looking forward to you adding Bruno again later on so update soon!