Reviews for A Merciless Affection
anjijenshi chapter 47 . 6h
I remember on Pottermore that he use to teach Muggle Studies.

1988: He teaches Muggle Studies,
1989: His year off
1990: Quirrell as teacher
1991: Quirrelmort as teacher.
The L. MMonster chapter 16 . 5/29
A second review for the previous chapter:

This was rape, no two-ways about it. Gosh, it tears me up because you are a great writer and I'm so interested. But this is horrific. The marriage... Snape's behavior since nearly the beginning. Minerva's and Albus' behavior. I left you a very scathing, rude review a couple of years ago about it, and it all still holds true for me. But I will keep going now because maybe this can surprise me. Idk.

Maybe I just became more tolerant of the fact that like everything else, 'rape' is a concept whose definition is varied. I'm truly sorry if you ever lived something like what Sarah lived in this chapter. I would call it rape with absolutely no shadow of a doubt; If I were in Sarah's shoes I would murder Snape for it or at least be consumed by such loathing no forgiveness or reconciliation would be possible. I'm so so so angry and this is just dumb fiction.

But I suppose that for you, and by consequence Sarah and Severus, this was not rape. So... Again, you're a very good writer, and I'm sorry for being so negative. This just messes me up. I've read extremely dark stories, with rape, murder, and everything in between. I guess what bothers me here is that it goes unacknowledged. Even Sarah isn't sure if she was raped; but she pleaded him to not do it, she said no, he had to immobilize her. And you put no warnings about it, didn't name it as it is in the beginning or end. That's what bothers me.

But oh well. If my frustration is too great... I just won't read. Two years ago it was. Now...it's up there, but I might be tempted by the good writing.
chinalatina28 chapter 57 . 2/8
what happened to carpe baculum?
chinalatina28 chapter 42 . 2/7
"men seldom know their own minds" ain't that the truth!
chinalatina28 chapter 31 . 2/7
Hahaha Death eater daddy issues! A man like Daddy is very sexy, Freud be damned!
chinalatina28 chapter 29 . 2/7
Oh my God they are both drama queens
chinalatina28 chapter 28 . 2/7
She did ask what to expect. He gave her nothing to work with. As a teacher and Death Eater he should have the foresight to prepare her
chinalatina28 chapter 16 . 2/7
this is really funny to read as a 40-something adult. his snark just would not bother me, and i'd frequently be telling him {playfully} to shut up. I'm glad she is starting to dish it back.

The shouting would bother me, but not initiating sex. did he get her pregnant on purpose? that's nagging at me
Setsuna24 chapter 64 . 9/10/2019
I loved this story, found it in a list of fics to read before you die and i concur. It was amazing and Sarah was not Mary sue which I'm so glad about. The only question I have about this is, it wasn't very clear to me why Sarah couldn't get pregnant again, could u explain?
Guest chapter 64 . 4/22/2019
Just read this for the 4th time (the 1st was before you had finished it). Really enjoyed it every time. Thank you
freedom is the greatest lie chapter 64 . 11/27/2018
This is the great Fanfiction I have ever read. I never liked a Fanfiction over the original before but your writing is just magic. I thank you for writing such a great Fanfiction that it was able to inspire me to start my own writing. Thank you. And I love this story.
LordHadesinTartarus chapter 64 . 10/14/2018
You are a fantastic writer - but this is a seriously screwed up story. I realize that was your intention and congrats on being Steven King - esque in your creepiness execution
Guest chapter 64 . 9/8/2018
Ok so I have spent the last week of my life reading this. I loved the story. Sarah is great. Her romance with Snape is very believable. That being said. I hated the epiologes. I wish you had done 2 final ones like their sons sorting and then a sweet moment or something. Instead they were jumbled and I dont think it was a proper end for such an amazing story.
xTragicTheGreatx chapter 3 . 5/14/2018
I can't even breathe... I love your style so much. this is wonderfully well written!
Guest chapter 64 . 5/12/2018
Lovely story, thanks again so much for it. An epilogue that really wraps things up is quite appreciated.

Vivat!
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