I love your descriptions! I never got to play this game but I'm watching playthroughs of it. Without comments, though. Just the scenes. I like it and I enjoy reading the scenes too and your take on it -

This story is off to an AWESOME start! :D

Your thing with the name reveals makes perfect sense!

Can't wait for Dora to use the gems

don't make me summon forth captain a!

2016. can you please off atlantica? die-hard fan of sora and kairi's relationship and I love the series. more chapters!

I've been looking for a story like this. I hope I like it.

Oh this is just beautiful. How long did it take you to write each chapter and did you have to play the game as you wrote this? I absolutely LOVE KH and love that you took the time to write this down. It's also a nice refresher of some things that happened.

It's wonderfully written. Very detailed and in depth. You really captured how it is to play the game- the confusion in the beginning of being surrounded by darkness and a dreamlike state, having to choose which powers to cultivate the most, the adrenaline rush when you fight a heartless for the first time. I love it

no offense, but 'Grecian' isn't a word. the word is Greek. other than that, I LOVE YOUR STORY! Kingdom hearts is one of my fave games.

On the off-chance that you'll read this: It's such a shame that you stopped updating this story. It's a really good read and I would've loved to see how you would've handled a certain event in Hallow Bastion, especially with how well you were developing Sora and Donald's relationship. Well all in all I really enjoyed this novelization. :)

I'm a big fan of the KH series, and i've been looking for a story like this for ages. I've copied it all down into a word document and I hope you finish the book!

I was walking around in a Target store, when I saw a cashier hand this little boy some money boy couldn't have been more than 5 or 6 years cashier said, "I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll."Then the little boy turned to the old woman next to him: ''Granny, are you sure I don't have enough money?''The old lady replied: ''You know that you don't have enough money to buy this doll, my dear.''Then she asked him to stay there for just 5 minutes while she went to look a round. She left quickly. The little boy was still holding the doll in his hand. Finally, I walked toward him and I asked him who he wished to give this doll to."It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much for Christmas. She was sure that Santa Claus would bring it to her."I replied to him that maybe Santa Claus would bring it to her afterall, and not to he replied to me sadly. "No, Santa Claus can't bring it to her where she is now. I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there."His eyes were so sad while saying this. "My sister has gone to be with God. Daddy says that Mommy is going to see God very soon too, so I thought that she could take the doll with her to give it to my sister.''My heart nearly little boy looked up at me and said: "I told daddy to tell mommy not to go yet. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall."Then he showed me a very nice photo of him where he was laughing. He then told me "I want mommy to take my picture with her so she won'tforget me. I love my mommy and I wish she doesn't have to leave me, but daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister."Then he looked again at the doll with sad eyes, very quietly.I quickly reached for my wallet and said to the boy. "Suppose we check again, just in case you do have enough money for the doll?''"OK," he said, "I hope I do have enough." I added some of my money to his without him seeing and we started to count it. There was enough forthe doll and even some spare little boy said: "Thank you God for giving me enough money!"Then he looked at me and added, "I asked last night before I went to sleep for God to make sure I had enough money to buy this doll, so thatmommy could give it to my sister. He heard me!''"I also wanted to have enough money to buy a white rose for my mommy, but I didn't dare to ask God for too much. But He gave me enough to buy the doll and a white rose.''"My mommy loves white roses."A few minutes later, the old lady returned and I left with my basket.I finished my shopping in a totally different state from when I started. I couldn't get the little boy out of my I remembered a local newspaper article two days ago, which mentioned a drunk man in a truck, who hit a car occupied by a young woman and a little little girl died right away, and the mother was left in a critical state. The family had to decide whether to pull the plug on the life-sustaining machine, because the young woman would not be able to recover from the coma. Was this the family of the little boy?Two days after this encounter with the little boy, I read in the newspaper that the young woman had passed away.I couldn't stop myself as I bought a bunch of white roses and I went to the funeral home where the body of the young woman was exposed for people to see and make last wishes before her was there, in her coffin, holding a beautiful white rose in her hand with the photo of the little boy and the doll placed over her chest.I left the place, teary-eyed, feeling that my life had been changed forever.. The love that the little boy had for his mother and his sisteris still, to this day, hard to imagine. And in a fraction of a second, a drunk driver had taken all this away from you have 2 choices:1) Repost this message.2) Ignore it as if it never touched your heart

Ah, no more story.

I like this one, I've never had a chance to play kingdom hearts (no playstation, or any other console for that matter) and I have to say, even though I first saw this story years ago (literally, years) I never gave it a chance before because the game had never really caught my interest. Now I'm kicking myself for not reading it sooner. It's a great story, not so excessively detailed that reading it is an arduous task in and of itself, but, while it is fairly fast paced (I read the whole thing in about five hours, maybe six) there's still plenty of detail to fuel the imagination to fill in the scenes for somebody who's never caught more than a couple brief glimpses at the game.

It's frustrating that this hasn't been updated in four, coming up on five years, but I really don't have any room to complain there (three years later and I've still got writers block on my two active/hiatus stories), more so because you stopped on a cliff hanger! That's kind of cruel, you know? Ah well, c'est la vie. Still, it would be kind of nice if this got completed- if not the story, than at least this particular arc. But, once again, I really have no room to speak with my two hundred fifty some incomplete stories (and one complete, but that particular embarrassment shall never be seen by any eyes but mine own).

Well, it was a nice story while it lasted, too bad there isn't more, but it's not like I can mail you a honey badger to encourage you to get back to work on it. Not that's I'd mail anyone a honey badger of course (the postage is too expensive and I'm somewhat attached to my arms, you understand).

Anyway, thanks for the good read, maybe one day inspiration will come to you again and the rest of us can enjoy the fruits of your literary labor.

24CaratCoal (aka, the one who is still too lazy to sign in)

i love your fanfic can you please do another one like re coded or birth by sleep

Dude, the passage talking about them on an island paradise totally made me of the Twilight Zone!

continue already. waiting for three months. nice story. it is awsome