It's beautiful.

short and sweet just how i like it

Sad, very sad.

Beautiful last sentence. 'And they never wonder if she likes it that way.'

And I also like

'She's so weak.

She's indestructable.'

You really do have a way with words, you know? It shows more in your shorter stories, I feel (don't take this as valid critique) because in shorter works you have more freedom. In longer stories there are times when you have to be careful you're not repeating the same words, the same feelings. I don't know if you have this problem, but I do.

In shorter works, it's just one, brief, brilliant burst of creativity, you know?

I was also happy to see a Hinata-centric fic of yours, because she does happen to be one of my favorites. And my god, it was lovely. The sword hanging over their heads...

Well, I'll save that for that fic's review.

By the way, thank you kindly for reviewing my newest fanfiction. I was surprised to see anyone had reviewed at all, and doubly delighted to see that it was you who reviewed. And not only that, you said some really nice things, things that made sense. So, thank you.

hm...its good i like it

demon-lulu

This is very interesting. It seems like...I don't know how to explain it, like a imperfect perfection (?) or maybe it's something that makes them stronger than others...yet weak at the same time. It's very interesting. I like it! Kunoichi rules!

i think it was beautiful, i think it made no sense and all came together imperfectly perfect. like a piece to a puzzle that will never fit. kudos _loving smile_

i really enjoyed it. yeah, mass-produced did come to mind. kunoichi kick ass! _~ you captured the meaning perfectly.

sort of scary, for some reason. The ignored will rage on forever unnoticed... that much I know. I appreciate the way you personify Sakura to have her be more than she is in the anime.

Short but very good...it's really hard to not idolize you U

(the rest of this isn't a review) could you email me I need help with something and my mail is being odd. It won't let me send stuff to you.

Thanks! Great one-shot!

~Kage

*is crying* You are incomprehendable. How can you write so much, continue your stories so long, and be completely awesome? *shakes head* It's impossible...

I love this...

Happy Easter *Lukky-kun has been dressed up as a bunny (which he already is) and is currently eating MKRA's dogs*

MKRA

Beautiful. True. I like it.

Hm... So, I'm guessing this story pertains to all the female shinobi, or one in particular? After a few moments of thought, I came up with no one that fit everything. Closest was Hinata...

I liked this story, though.