2 WEEKS! ITS BEEN 15 YEARS.

Like the story, always in for something different. A tad bit behind on your promised next posting date. Hope all is well with you!

I really wish Harry got the living shit kicked out of him by Bella. And tortured for a while too, ideally. SOMETHING should have happened to him, more than the one spell that hit him without accomplishing much. Something to punish him for being as arrogant as Snape always said he washe actually gave Bella a chance to fight. He didn't even disarm or immobilize her to mock her or whatever he wanted to do. He could have straight up killed her, but didn't, and even then he shouldn't have allowed her the opportunity to fight. It's stupidity of the highest order.

Just thought I'd point out that if Harry dove out the the way after Bella cursed from behind him he'd be dead. Without cover, diving would let Bella launch four or five curses before Harry got back up. You wrote it as if Bella specifically waited for him to get back up before continuing combat. While I suppose that is possible, I really don't see that happening.

Wow. Really good story. I guess real life came and took you away? It's sad because this story is really fantastic and it is just n the middle of the first wave of storytelling. Sigh.
Perhaps someday you will remember it and get hooked back in? I hope so! Dust off that old muse and jump right in.

I see you had to use the name Tenaroe to get others attention. If he comes out though, he is Azkaban bound for using the AK. Wouldn't it have been better to put another spike between the eyes?

plz uppdate

/facepalm
Oh, Harry... I see why the hat put you in gryffindor. You should have just killed her from behind when you could, would have saved you the fight. Or tied her up and torture and mock her after.

Anyway. Ignoring the incredibly OOC dumbles, I really like your fic.

Fun fact: Draco was a skilled in Occumancy before he even started Hogwarts, according to J.K. Rowling herself.

Excellent story. And well-written, too. No jarring spelling or grammatical errors, plus the plot and characterization was well done. Thank you for posting.

Stupefy!

Did I get you? Did your constant vigilance work this time? :)

14days( 2weeks) in Dalyons eyes is equal to 14 years. Still waiting for an update mate

Written disclaimers on stories are the fiction version of citing your sources on a formal paper.

Whatever happened to already having the next chapter in your head and that you would be posting in the next 2 weeks? It's been 14 years... And it was getting so good as well!

Hope you update again soon