A very sweet and amusing story, they are so cute together ! It's also amusing they are so open with each others while hidden the extense of their feelings.

really literally tossed off the roof? bit harsh but i imagine kakashi's face smiling:

This was such a cute story. and they stayed in character. I loved it

#squeal OMFG I just loved this! :3 so well written, and I loved Iruka in here!

That was really. Good. I like your style of writing, and it was interesting on how you made the scar longer. Keep up the good work.

Haha, yes Kakashi, tossing someone off the roof after your first kiss with him will definitely score you points.

Now just make sure you catch him XD

Aww.. that was sweet. Really sweet. Funny too. And I love how you write everything so that they'll register in our minds vividly. X3

A note: Oi, Kakashi, you better make sure you catch him! XD

LOL.

Love it, especially the last line.

~Astral~

yay! this was so sweet! I really like it. Well written and still yay! i'm in too much of a fangirl mood to give you any real reviews/critique ... but it was good... fav.

Very cute :)

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I enjoyed this immensely.

ahahaa that was so sweet and the last part was pretty funny. Nice work!

Moving! Love the storyline. Very cute and fluffy. :D Makes me smile.

hnn...leave it to kakashi to trow someone off a roof after he kissed them.

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just wonderful!

man, i love your fics... i think i've gotten so used to your style that it's gonna be tough to read any other author for a while :) yup, i've been diggin through your writing for the past three days, and i'm so sad that i already read almost everything you've posted XD hope you'll feed my obsession soon enough though '_~

oh, and did you ever thought of writing hikago stuff? hehe just a suggestion (i'd love to read Akihika made by you but hey, this is just silly selfish me, don't take it too seriously)