I am so happy to have come across this story. It's like nothing i have ever read. your plot is original and your writing style is flawless. I am adding it to my favorites please, please update. Thank you.

Nicely written.

CM Punk sucks. Ryback is a legend.

You haven't updated this wonderful story in five years? That's a shame. If you've lost interest in it, why not put it up for adoption?

Anyway, I really love the concept of this story. The idea of the group acknowledging themselves as a pack is just amazing. I always liked to think they saw each other as family.

I really like how you've added some mystery into Kagome's time. The shrine is very well warded, there are youkai hidden among the populace, and I suspect that science teacher of Kagome's. It's just too convenient that he's assigned her work on wolf packs and the juxtaposition of canine and human social structures. Since Inuyasha has been scenting wolf youkai, could Takashi-sensei be Kouga? I'm probably getting ahead of myself but I tend to do so even with the smallest of hints.

I hope you'll be able to continue this story (either by writing more or offering adoption) and if not it was a very good read.

I absolutly love this story! Is there a chance that it could be finished? Yes I know its roughly 4 years since you stopped but like you I 'found' these guys recently and love the characters, you've done a wonderful job of writing this and I would love to find out what happens. I'm a fairly new and inept writer so I really treasure well written stories like yours. Thank you so much for your time.

sometimes it doesn't quite match up with the series but at other times it better suits it than many other fan fictions, all while blending in the dreams of what people wish to see from fan-fics.

Great story!

Nexi: SO SAD!

Nexa: You're always that way. *Thumps* Shut up!

Nexi: *whimper*

Just ignore them. *CRASH! 'my arm doesn't bend that way!'* I love this story! When are you gonna update? I hope it's at least by sunday, because that's my birthday... and i get the computer anytime i want! I COULD READ FOR HOURS!

Keep up the good work! I got you a pep squad!

Pep squad: GO, AUTHOR, GO! YOU CAN DO IT! GO, NEVERToLD, GO!

They will keep bugging you until you update! MWUAHAHA*cough, hack, pant,**really squeaky voice* That was a bug... not half bad.

This is the second time I read your story and its gets better every time I read it. I hope you will soon finish it or at least post at least 4 or 5 more chapters .

this is a really great story , i love the way that you slowly made inuyasha and kagome mature and get closer and know each other . um are you going to be udating soon . plz plz plz plz plz plz plz say that ur going to update soon.

im start over gonna read one more time oh yeh nuff said

THis story is Awesome! Are you evr going to continue it or have you stopped? Please don't stop, I just found it!

I just found your story and have read all that you have posted, and I must say that I love this story. Not only is the concept fairly unique, the writing is excellent. At a time when so many stories jump through important events to get straight to the point, you take your time, pacing the story and building a solid foundation.

The Koga scene was great. So many times he's portrayed as a nice guy who is in love with the wrong woman when, in reality, he's a pushy jerk who has no respect for Kagome, InuYasha or anyone else.

The conflict resolution provides the characters with growth opportunities, and the creation of the "pack" shows their deep bond as friends (almost family). Bravo!

Are you going to continue this story? I really love your plot and would love to find out how everthing ends. If you can, please finish.

A devoted reader.

I love your story and I can't wait until you update! You should really think about writing as a career! Great Job!

This was the only way I could review again, under anonymous. What happened? you were doing so good in updating and then you stopped. I hope you didn't die or something. Maybe you merely ran out of ideas. I don't know. I'm only the lowly reviewer. Please update soon and prove to me your not dead!

~palikani