Good story. Any chance of putting up some more?

Oh, wow, this story is so amazing and heart-breaking! Leo, noooo! I have no idea what's going to happen next...

OMG I had to marathon read this as soon as I found it. Your prose is so poetic! Usually major character death is too much for my fragile heart, but the way you've crafted the heartwrenching reaction to loss has been so overwhelmingly addictive I couldn't NOT keep reading! I wish I could go back in time to read this again with fresh eyes, so good

My goodness where do I even begin? This fic is absolutely *phenomenal*, undoubtedly one of the best I've ever read. The way flashbacks are interwoven into the story is incredibly effective, and April's dream sequence in Ch. 22? The most realistic dream sequence I've ever read. It was like something I would've dreamed. It had that strange quality that dreams have, where things make sense and don't at the same time. My goodness I am absolutely floored at how wonderfully this fic is written, and I adore how you write Raph, April, and their interactions and relationship. Thank you so so much for writing this fic, and if you ever continue it I will definitely be here to read! 3

I wish beyond all hope that you finish this amazing story. I stumbled upon this and honestly, I need to find out the ending. Hopefully, one day you'll update.

Lunexa

So amazing and its not finished... I cant believe it...Could you please, finish it? Youll make us very happy! Please? ;)

On the suggestion of a another writer, I followed their advice and looked you over. This piece is inspiration for another like it. Something truly maddening and just as hostile, and just as deep and painful. I wanted you to know that reading this brought many tears and solemn thoughts and I am so sorry that there will not be more.

So...I discovered this story yesterday 1/18/17 and read it all. Didn't realize it was unfinished! This was seriously amazing...I'm at a bit of a loss because I know it will probably never be finished, but I thought maybe if one more person begged you this could tip the scales! Your writing is just perfect...I think this is the best fanfic I've ever read. Even if you don't finish...I'm still glad I got to read at least this much. Thanks!

Scouts honor my ass! Unless you decide to finish this beautiful masterpiece and prove me wrong...?
This is hands down one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I could not read through one chapter without crying. Oh frick poor raphie. He's delt with SO much on his shoulders.
And my oh my how you ended it with Leo coming to his senses! Ahh you are killing me! I just want Raph to see Leo himself again. And Leo to remember Raphs name and be home.
The fact that Raph keeps a piece of Dons shell on him kills me. And how Mikey was so busted up, how he screamed in pain. Oh mother of pearl this story has kept me awake until 3 in the morning for two days stright! I've spent all my free time reading this. I really wish you would finish it. It would need two more chapters tops with how long you write them. Thank you for writing this much though, it's so different than any other tmnt stories I've come across. I hope everything is going okay for you(: and don't be shy to update anytime soon. I followed & favorited this just in case

All this deliciously painful story... and it hasn't been updated for years and years. I wonder if it ever will again. Think I'll follow just in case. Sometimes these old behemoths suddenly come alive again, as rare and delightful a treat as can be imagined. Don't want to miss that, just in case.

please update!

please come back. My heart longs for answers. My heart hurts. I cannot believe this story has withered and died. I apologize for reading it so many years after your last update, but i was recently introduced to this site. Please put my heart to rest with closure. If you're still out there, please don't leave us in the dark!

NO! When i began this story, i was mortified. But i stayed with it, and i finally began to enjoy it. My heart still hurts though. What happens next? Does Leo finally come back to the world of the living? Does he make it to Raph's side in time? Do they throw their arms around each other in a grief stricken embrace while tears soak their shoulders? Does Raph finally release all his pent up sorrow in while in his brother's arms? Does Leo finally regain his soul and accepte the one brother he has left? Do they survive? OMG! I need to know!

omg if your still out there please finish this

one of the best and most depressing stories I've read in a long time. just sad it took me so lomg to get to