Reviews for Speaking French
welovewolfstar chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
omg this is just sooo adorable :)
love the french 3
Ayline7 chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
God the level of adorableness.
lesbiansassemble chapter 1 . 1/1/2018
adorable
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
Hey! I'm French (and proud of it!) and I really liked your story because I looooove Remus :)
So RemusFrenchperfect match, I wasn't able not to love this story
I saw a few mistakes but someone has ever noticed them so I'm not going to tell them again, but your French is very good! And French is a really difficult language to learn, I'm glad to have learnt it since I'm a baby :)
Thank you !
The Tea Party Witch chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Amazing, adorable and fluffy!
LunaLogan chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Omg I love it XD but I don't understand why English and Americans say that French is sexy XD I speak French and I prefer English personnaly XD
Ju chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
Hello !
I'm french.
Cette fanfiction est géniale
Mais "avoir l'air comestible" ne se dit pas vraiment
Bye _
SomehowSlytherin chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Yay! My weekly lesson in French!
Tidem chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
I LOVED it. Jesus. Remus is so cute speaking french... even if I hardly imagine Lupin saying "putain, dégage faut que je me masturbe " XD
I put it on my favorites !
Nevertheless, I am french (That's why I use such a bad english...) and I noticed some mistakes, maybe you could be interested in... I don't wanna hurt you nor judge you at all...
"Charmant" is a right word but I think "séduisant", which has the same sense, looks better and more natural.
"Est-ce que tu peux arrêter d'avoir l'air aussi comestible" (with one single "m") ? Maybe you could turn it into "Tu pourrais cesser d'avoir autant l'air à croquer ?"
"A croquer" means "comestible", but it is a french phrase which means " so cute that I almost wanna eat you" ! comestible looks a little bit weird.
"Comment je me sentais, tu ne voudrais pas avoir affaire à moi non plus. I understand what you wanted to say say when I read the english translation, but in french that doesn't realy make a sense...
I think " Si tu savais à quoi je pense à ces moments-là, toi aussi préférerais probablement me fuir..."
That is just my opinion ! thanks !
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Je t'aime actually means 'I like you'
Hare and Heron chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
How come no one ever thought of this?! Remus and french sound sooo good put together!
Thanks for writing :)
HeCallsMeDarlin chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
I can just imagine:
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Sirius: *innocently but sexily licking spoon*
Remus: *twitches*
Innocent Bystander Who Just Happens To Speak French: *lifts goblet to take a sip*
Remus: *breaks* *in French* You bloody tease, keep it up and I'll shag you against the wall!
Bystander: *chokes on pumpkin juice*
Sirius: *adorably uncomprehending and baffled*
Classic. Wonderful story.
LaylanatorXVII chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
*clutches fabric of shirt over heart*
*slowly collapses to knees*
Remus...and French...together...
Too...sexy...
Must...recooperate...from the "putein d'allumeur, si tu continues, je te baises contre le meur" comment...
Too late...
*dies from overexposure to Remus's sexiness*
Thank you so much. Though I now sort of want to tie a cinder block around Sirius's ankles, throw him in the lake with the Giant Squid and drag Remus away to have my wicked way with him... :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
Magiclulajane chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
awww I love this :)
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