Although I read this story a year ago, it's still with me. I can't stop thinking about it and maybe never will. You have crafted something really compelling. It's a great example of writing that changes direction based on emotionally-driven, complex character development. The action flawlessly builds up to Seto's question, "Who am I?" and progresses toward his attempt to answer it.

I know you'll probably never finish this story. I know the characters will probably never have to face the consequences of their actions. That's okay. Perhaps it's more honest to life because none of us finish answering the question, "Who am I?"

Thank you, Hamilcar, for helping me write my own story. Thank you for writing.

When will chapter 12 be posted? Great chapter so far. My favorite chapter so far.

please update soon! Can't wait to see how this turns out!

Are you Satan?

Don't you think having Seto remove the picture of his brother from the card shaped locket, just to replace it with someone els'es, is a step to far in the wrong direction? :-

wow!

I am just absolutely in love with this story. My heart honestly ached while I was reading. This is really the sort of plot I enjoy, and although it seems your last update was a very long while ago, I continue to hope that you will expand on this story.

With Gratitude,

Mei

ok that was just creepy! not wut i expected!

Hi. I reviewed a long time ago as setosgirl0, saying something about how I'd been hoping that Seto would stay uke. Well, now I've matured, and since I'm on a Pegasus bender, I was thinking "You know, there was that one great story on ffn..." I came to read and happily found two more chapters ~ I really do love your story, and am only sad to see that it's not finished. I love what you've done... I'll probably be thinking about pretty girl!Pegasus the whole time while I'm at work tonight ; How rewarding, for Pegasus to get the attention he wants and Seto to get his pretty China doll. Beautiful, whether they end up in a more normal relationship or not. (( *votes for not* ))

WOW! Can’t say that I’ve seen this development coming. Great chapter after all this time with no update. Looking forward for the next one!

Nice story although it's a bit sad. continue please .

This story is sad, I am very interested in it and hope you continue it. I like it very much. But I want to know who the other 'client' is!

This story rocks i kinda feel bad about Pegasus but, mabey it will all work out! Keep up the sad yet beautiful work!

what have you done to peggers? he doesn't deserve this... ack! *hugs peggers* (love it_ it's so sad... and so cool! i love the way you write, it reminds me of some of my older stuff... i GOTTA start writing like that again! can't wait for Ch. 11!

omG! This is not what I was expecting when I clicked on the link. In the first chapter, the ooc-ness of seto turned my stomach, but I clicked on the next chapter anyway. Soo glad I did. Your chapters in Seto's point of view are masterly. His struggles againts the potion and then his revenge. It was amazing. Very well done!