you literally rushed it from here and took vegeta out of character and also bulma, bruh this is just sad

that was nice :)

I wish you would write a sequel ;)

Nice. Real nice. I love it!

I really love the whole story. Not just because it is about Vegeta and Bulma, but because it is so humorous, romantic, and, well, I just love it. So, thank you for writing such a great story.

great

awesome

Your story had a great start, but once you revealed Vegeta and Bulma's relationship to everyone the story became uneventful to want to keep reading. I did finish, but I am regretting it. Nothing happened, how many times can we read about them going shopping, the characters became much more shallow and one-dimensional. Instead of writing so many chapters about the Bahamas, which nothing interesting happened, maybe you should have written out Vegeta and Bulma's discussion about the college decision. I can see why many readers did not finish reading this story.
Yet, your other story MESSAGES is so much better written, still a few grammatical errors and spelling, but the plot is really good. Plus, the B-line stories are also good. So the good thing you have really improved your writing skills.

the problem is not length, but the content of the chapters. I can see you did lose your mojo for this story. Maybe you should scrap the bahamas chapters out, they don't add anything to the story-too many and are not eventful or useful for your story.

this chapter was unnecessary nothing happened.

hi i realy like your fic it was so nice abd cute well good job i wish the end was more i dont now more happy or sheesy haha anyway i love it

congruats

of course love it

wow...

Awesome... story, I loved how they stayed together in the end... all of them...

Id like to read a sequel to this it was a great story and should be continued

make a sequile