Please update soon

This fic is so sweet, I'm really enjoying it so far! I'm glad you've started writing chapters for it again
ja ne!~

I feel as though I have wasted the three days I spent reading this fic...the plot was confusing, if there even was one, the characters were completely impersonal and you kept introducing new events without giving any background on them or even revisiting the important ones that should've greatly impacted the plot. Like Draco being attacked in chapter 19 and Hermione kissing Ravial in chapter 29? I was at least hoping you could've put enough time into this fic to finish it. I kept reading to see if I could make sense of the plot but I'm sorry to say this but I'm pretty disappointed. :(

I find it extremely odd that when Draco is hit on (rather obviously and crudely) Harry reaction is to instantly try to disarm the spell...and we get pretty much nothing from Severus. Even afterwards, the situation isn't mentioned again. And couldn't that have been a major trigger for Draco, even as recovered as he was? Why didn't they make sure he was emotionally okay, afterwards!?

Instead, Severus and Draco huff and puff when Harry gets smiled at...uh, okay?

And this chapter seems really, really, really, out of place. Suddenly all these new characters are appearing (even if they are minor), and drama breaks out between them too.

And suddenly, Severus, Harry, and Draco (In that order) are not even the focus of the chapter. Just these random characters who I could care less about, and this sudden scene of drama in action with to many pieces left out for me to give even an ounce of crap about it. :/

This story is really on my top 10 list of SS/DM/HP list, but I am beginning to think, from this chapter alone, that maybe it is a good thing it wasn't finished.

I feel like there is something missing in this threesome. Harry and Draco are connecting, and so is Harry and Severus, but when it comes to Severus and Draco...it's lacking. Which is pretty common when dealing with this combination of threesome (Severus/Harry/Draco, with Harry in the middle mostly getting the attention or the one to come in and 'complete' them.)

I also noticed that Severus mentioned that he 'needed' Harry but only 'wanted' Draco. There is a huge difference between the two...and it shows.

I relly like this fic and adore the pairing and if u dont mind me asking is Ravial and Remus going to get together cause i like to c tht keep up gokd work doing great

The writing in this chapter is different from the others.

Really good chapter. Now we're getting somewhere!

That was fun.

Writing is good as ever. I really wish that there was some more context as to what had happened for them to make it to this point though.

Please update this story again son. I have really enjoyed reading it and can't wait to see what happens next

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PLEASE FINISH! I'm very curious to see where your story leads. :)

TheShadowGates

hey

love the story so far please keep updating

I love this story. Not many people have a really good threesome, after the final battle story. Keep up the good work.

love it! really hope you start updating again. otherwise all that reading goes to waste (